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in the castle of my heart.
God only knows how hard I tried
but on this day my Camelot died.
My blood has frozen very slowly
as my heart has gotten lonely;
and in my mind I see her face
that God lent to me in His grace.
I see your spirit deeply dawning
in the pools your eyes are fawning.
Your love fills up the hourglass
but then I turn it over fast;
watching as the golden sands,
with your love, slips through my hands.
I lost your love, you're mine no more,
my heart is but a barren shore.
A wasteland now, with passion spent;
and so my soul has now been rent.
Eternal wound, this open sore,
for love is love forever more.
How can I relieve this sadness?
If I feel more I'll be in madness.
Hide me from emotions deep
or for all time I'll have to weep.

darkhorse71
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Legend of the Heart

Contributed by darkhorse71 on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:32:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why is this? I'm torn apart
in the castle of my heart.
God only knows how hard I tried
but on this day my Camelot died.
My blood has frozen very slowly
as my heart has gotten lonely;
and in my mind I see her face
that God lent to me in His grace.
I see your spirit deeply dawning
in the pools your eyes are fawning.
Your love fills up the hourglass
but then I turn it over fast;
watching as the golden sands,
with your love, slips through my hands.
I lost your love, you're mine no more,
my heart is but a barren shore.
A wasteland now, with passion spent;
and so my soul has now been rent.
Eternal wound, this open sore,
for love is love forever more.
How can I relieve this sadness?
If I feel more I'll be in madness.
Hide me from emotions deep
or for all time I'll have to weep.

darkhorse71

Copyright © darkhorse71 ... [ 2005-09-20 03:32:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Legend of the Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 02:04:54 PM AEST
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Glad to see you are back. Oh, do I ever know how you are feeling. Sometimes you wander if you can actually move on without their love. I love this whole poem but what stands out to me is

"I lost your love, your mine no more,
my heart is but a barren shore".

I know how that feels. Welcome back.

Great write. Hope i can relate to more of your writings.

Re: Legend of the Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:19:24 PM AEST
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This is a heartfelt and moving write, you really expressed your feelings well in this beautiful , but sad poem

Leia36

Re: Legend of the Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:11:54 AM AEST
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Well written. Those are beautiful words. A truly awesome piece.
Take care.
David

Re: Legend of the Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:31:02 AM AEST
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Oh me very sad but great writing.
huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Legend of the Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by xMyxBleedingxHeartx on Friday, 13th June 2008 @ 04:48:21 AM AEST
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"Your love fills up the hourglass
but then I turn it over fast;
watching as the golden sands,
with your love, slips through my hands."

Wow...that was beautiful.

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