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Array ( [sid] => 106058 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Broken Heart [time] => 2005-09-20 02:32:35 [hometext] => This is written for anyone who has ever felt the pain the way I have. [bodytext] => Shattered lying in a pool of blood
no sign of life can be found.
I do what I can to try and revive it
as it lies in pieces on the ground.

There's no staple or stitch strong enough
to put my heart back in too.
You can try and pick up the pieces
but it's broken because of you.

Each phase in life brings a broken heart
though they never hurt quite the same.
I've never felt a pain like this before
and you are the one to blame.

I hear the echoes of your promises
bouncing off the walls of my heart.
Maybe betrayal is what actually hurt it
when you ripped my insides apart.

When a love is strong and promising
and forever willing to be around...
Why would you rip out a barely mended heart
and then stomp it to the ground? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 39 [informant] => faith4reelz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

My Broken Heart

Contributed by faith4reelz on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 02:32:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Shattered lying in a pool of blood
no sign of life can be found.
I do what I can to try and revive it
as it lies in pieces on the ground.

There's no staple or stitch strong enough
to put my heart back in too.
You can try and pick up the pieces
but it's broken because of you.

Each phase in life brings a broken heart
though they never hurt quite the same.
I've never felt a pain like this before
and you are the one to blame.

I hear the echoes of your promises
bouncing off the walls of my heart.
Maybe betrayal is what actually hurt it
when you ripped my insides apart.

When a love is strong and promising
and forever willing to be around...
Why would you rip out a barely mended heart
and then stomp it to the ground?

Copyright © faith4reelz ... [ 2005-09-20 02:32:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:05:08 AM AEST
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I've felt this pain too many times before. This is a great first write you have here. I look forward to reading more from you! :-)

Re: My Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 04:53:23 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
Well written piece. I really like many of your word phrases. Good job.
Take care, and again, welcome.
David

Re: My Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:21:15 AM AEST
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There's nothing like the pain of a broken heart... Nice write. Like the part about the sticthes and staples. XOXO

Re: My Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by mjh0813 on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:35:54 AM AEST
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wow this was really good..i can relate to how you feel b/c ive been there...i know its hard but hey at least now you can find someone better
peace and love
*~meg*~

Re: My Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:27:05 AM AEST
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Very well written and raw emotions of the heart.

I wish you a gentle healing.

ES

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