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Array ( [sid] => 106055 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost... [time] => 2005-09-20 01:39:18 [hometext] => i wrote this about a stray dog that died in front of my house i started crying really lots cause his sister was just cuddled up to him so i took his sister i need a name for her but shes still scared of me she has to get used to me i hope u like this one [bodytext] => I see your dead body on the ground
Where its picked and kicked around

I tear drop falls down my cheek
Everywhere so gloomy and bleak

To see no one would care
Constantly in your own worst nightmare

Your sister is trying to warm up to your body
Died when he was just a baby

Its disgusting the way you get treated
A mother is all you ever needed

None of gods creatures should live like this
Living in such a miserable bliss

You were starving,unprosperous and alone
Died in your sleep quiet without a moan

Just like the life you led
Lost,unloved and misled
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Lost...

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:39:18 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I see your dead body on the ground
Where its picked and kicked around

I tear drop falls down my cheek
Everywhere so gloomy and bleak

To see no one would care
Constantly in your own worst nightmare

Your sister is trying to warm up to your body
Died when he was just a baby

Its disgusting the way you get treated
A mother is all you ever needed

None of gods creatures should live like this
Living in such a miserable bliss

You were starving,unprosperous and alone
Died in your sleep quiet without a moan

Just like the life you led
Lost,unloved and misled

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-09-20 01:39:18]
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Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:49:06 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this and can relate to it because I've had dogs that died.

Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 12:12:21 AM AEST
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So sorry u had to endure this pain and that the dog went throught this, a beautiful and sad write, such anguish is unavoidable . . .

(((((( D ))))))

Ben

Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 01:18:16 AM AEST
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You took a tragedy and turned it around....Good for you. You couldn't save the one dog, but you've saved another from a similar fate. May you and your new furry friend have many happy years together : )
Nicely done with this write.

Scorp.

Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:27:53 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Quite emotional.

Perhaps you could name the surviving pup, Love because she loved and was devoted to her brother. Or perhaps a name that equates to love.

Anywho, thanks for sharing. This is a great write.

Tim
:)

Re: Lost... (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:58:54 PM AEST
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This was a good write! i Loved it! And that must have been hard to see that poor dog die right in front of your house. I would cry too! Its hard when any one of Gods creations have died. Some people dont notice dogs as much but they need attention too!

Anyways loved your poem!

Love Kimmy

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