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I can't tell anyone about the day i had
I can't find it in myself to forget him.
I can't pretend to smile anymore
this has to stop.
i have to accept this
This is real, and so is the pain.
No one can ever feel the same about me
because I am nothing special
and Im not who they want me to be.
And I'm sorry
If I could change myself-
I would.

I can feel the tears tensing up in my eyes.
I can feel it burning while it mixes with my eyeliner.
It stings, but I can be strong about it.
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About to break..

Contributed by Lollypopxcore on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:27:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

And Im giving up because it hurts so bad
I can't tell anyone about the day i had
I can't find it in myself to forget him.
I can't pretend to smile anymore
this has to stop.
i have to accept this
This is real, and so is the pain.
No one can ever feel the same about me
because I am nothing special
and Im not who they want me to be.
And I'm sorry
If I could change myself-
I would.

I can feel the tears tensing up in my eyes.
I can feel it burning while it mixes with my eyeliner.
It stings, but I can be strong about it.

Copyright © Lollypopxcore ... [ 2005-09-19 23:27:46]
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Re: About to break.. (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:56:27 PM AEST
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great poem
i hope to see some more of your work on the site
keep up the good work

-Callif

Re: About to break.. (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:42:13 AM AEST
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really like.....

;cb

Re: About to break.. (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:12:17 AM AEST
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awww......im sorry about that but im sure u are special and theres more guys out there and you'll find one that loves u and i hope your happy....great write i really liked it...

Dee,.

Re: About to break.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:50:40 AM AEST
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Great poem

"I know you
don't know what I'm going through
standing here looking at you"

Quote from "Hurt so bad" by Little Anthony and the Imperials

Re: About to break.. (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:33:32 AM AEST
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Each heart break just seems like the end of world, you soon realise that it is not...when the next one comes along.

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