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Made it easy on me?
Did you have to become a gentleman?
Did you have to call and see?

Why did you change now?
I'd already made up my mind
And now it's ging to be hard
I'm in a terrible bind

You see I'm not in love
And that's why I cannot stay
But you became a better man
In the day I was away

If you hadn't picked up that phone
To call and just check up
I might not feel so bad
That I want to breakup

I'm sorry I've made up my mind
And I won't let my thoughts stray
I'm sure you'll find someone better
Who won't run away [comments] => 6 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Breakup Dilemma

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:29:42 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Couldn't you have kept it simple?
Made it easy on me?
Did you have to become a gentleman?
Did you have to call and see?

Why did you change now?
I'd already made up my mind
And now it's ging to be hard
I'm in a terrible bind

You see I'm not in love
And that's why I cannot stay
But you became a better man
In the day I was away

If you hadn't picked up that phone
To call and just check up
I might not feel so bad
That I want to breakup

I'm sorry I've made up my mind
And I won't let my thoughts stray
I'm sure you'll find someone better
Who won't run away

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-09-19 19:29:42]
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Re: Breakup Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by allowanceofthoughts on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:40:35 PM AEST
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That was really good. I loved the questions at the beginning, because of how true they are.

Re: Breakup Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:40:51 PM AEST
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Aww it's such a lovely poem. I love it!

Re: Breakup Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:45:35 PM AEST
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Utterly amazing, wonderful write. Keep it up

Re: Breakup Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:29:14 AM AEST
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A beautiful flow and beautiful yet sad poem ,
of a most delicate subject though prtrayed very well . . .

(((((Kie-Kie))))

Ben

Re: Breakup Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:33:06 PM AEST
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Breakups are never easy anyway but I know what you mean here! So very sorry for this chin up & move on! Christina

Re: Breakup Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:31:45 AM AEST
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Effective dialogue of conflict, contact

Important self-awareness

The mental struggle is hard after a breakup, it seems incompatibility won out, your needs must be met in other ways..

great write, ty

Raquel Leah

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