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Array ( [sid] => 106030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => robyns poem [time] => 2005-09-19 19:22:59 [hometext] => this poem is for you robyn [bodytext] => If i were the night sky
then you would be my stars
and i know that no one could share
a love as pure as ours.

but sometimes at night
i look at that sky
i look at those stars
and i wonder why?

i wonder what happened
to our perfect love
i thought you were my angel
god sent from above.

i wonder what i would do
if i ever lost you
how would i cope
if i dont have you

then i look at the stars
and i see your face
smiling down on me
with a sweet embrace.

then i know
everything will be alright
even if you love me
just one more night.

i couldnt stand
to lose you
you know thats true

so please
just remember
ill always
love you! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 22 [informant] => timmy5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

robyns poem

Contributed by timmy5 on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:22:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If i were the night sky
then you would be my stars
and i know that no one could share
a love as pure as ours.

but sometimes at night
i look at that sky
i look at those stars
and i wonder why?

i wonder what happened
to our perfect love
i thought you were my angel
god sent from above.

i wonder what i would do
if i ever lost you
how would i cope
if i dont have you

then i look at the stars
and i see your face
smiling down on me
with a sweet embrace.

then i know
everything will be alright
even if you love me
just one more night.

i couldnt stand
to lose you
you know thats true

so please
just remember
ill always
love you!

Copyright © timmy5 ... [ 2005-09-19 19:22:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: robyns poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:46:46 PM AEST
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Beautifully composed. I loved the romance you put in. Wonderful write.

Re: robyns poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:19:38 PM AEST
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Great poem on the 4th line of the 4th stanza change don't to didn't and the flow of your poem will be perfect

Re: robyns poem (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:08:38 PM AEST
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I am absolutely overwhelmed at this. You didn't even say anything to me about it! You have shown me that true love of the purest kind is possible and I hope you know I love you more than words could possibly say... This is the sweetest thing you could ever have done and I thank you from the bottom of my heart and soul. If you could only see my face right now.....smooches xoxox

~Robyn(Blue)~

Re: robyns poem (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:10:14 AM AEST
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ok, don't think me crazy, but this is to much of a coincidence...my fiance's screenname is very much the same and you know my name of course, he also had a star named after me, so I apologize for the confusion, teehee, I still thought it a lovely write, very genuine indeed. I'm sure she will love it as you could already tell by my reaction previously. Nice work!

~Blue~(Robyn)

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