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How do you let the heart ache go?
when pain fall loving is all you know
How do you bear the sorrow of longing.

When that which is longed for is far from coming
Hw do you reach for the stars?
When you knoe the’ll never be yours.

How do you take things as they are?
If all else that matter are far
How do you say goodbye?
If you know your heart will hurt?

Wow do you say no to feeling
If it’s that-for which your heart is beating
How do you learned to love again.
If your Heart doesn’t mend.

How do you cry silently,
When your heart is cring
How do you spend the night alone?
When shadows to fearful have grown.

How do you sing an old song with.
All the notes gone wrong
How do you long for home’
When there’s no a place called home.

How do say,
“I love you”
When “good bye”
All turn into.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bench [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

ELEGY

Contributed by bench on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

How do you keep the tears from falling?
How do you let the heart ache go?
when pain fall loving is all you know
How do you bear the sorrow of longing.

When that which is longed for is far from coming
Hw do you reach for the stars?
When you knoe the’ll never be yours.

How do you take things as they are?
If all else that matter are far
How do you say goodbye?
If you know your heart will hurt?

Wow do you say no to feeling
If it’s that-for which your heart is beating
How do you learned to love again.
If your Heart doesn’t mend.

How do you cry silently,
When your heart is cring
How do you spend the night alone?
When shadows to fearful have grown.

How do you sing an old song with.
All the notes gone wrong
How do you long for home’
When there’s no a place called home.

How do say,
“I love you”
When “good bye”
All turn into.

Copyright Â© bench ... [ 2003-01-17 17:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ELEGY (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 05:54:01 PM AEST
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One of the first of your poems I read! This was really a good write,I alot to think about! Christina

Re: ELEGY (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 09:29:32 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...this is a beautiful write..just needs a bit of editing to be perfect!!!
Jenni

Re: ELEGY (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 09:54:03 AM AEST
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I like the last verse best. A good start.
Stitch

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