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Right on the ledge
You could’ve pulled me back
Could’ve put me back on track

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could have been a friend
And pulled me away from the end

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could’ve saved me and my life
Could’ve helped me win this strife

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could’ve easily saved me
But I guess you were an enemy

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
And then I felt your hands
They were as soft as sand

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
When I felt your hands push
And I fell with a ‘swoosh’

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
But I’m not anymore
I’m done with this war

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could’ve saved me
But then you just pushed me

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
And I am about to die
Because of your lies

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
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On the Edge

Contributed by sprinter27 on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:35:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could’ve pulled me back
Could’ve put me back on track

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could have been a friend
And pulled me away from the end

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could’ve saved me and my life
Could’ve helped me win this strife

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could’ve easily saved me
But I guess you were an enemy

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
And then I felt your hands
They were as soft as sand

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
When I felt your hands push
And I fell with a ‘swoosh’

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
But I’m not anymore
I’m done with this war

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could’ve saved me
But then you just pushed me

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
And I am about to die
Because of your lies

I was on the edge
Right on the ledge

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-09-19 16:35:43]
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Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:38:14 PM AEST
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The squeaky wheel gets the oil

This is a great write and you can always be pulled back so long as you don't give up.

Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:10:57 PM AEST
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I liked it too.
Good luck.
Alex

Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:30:13 PM AEST
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well GOSHERS this is just a great poem shelly. i dOoOoOo looove it. a great deal i do. ur a terrific writer.

oh and this damn baby... i want to break it aaaugh (i probably sound like some sort of child molester... people... the baby is NOT REAL lol)

jennie* xoXOxo

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