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Array ( [sid] => 105999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She [time] => 2005-09-19 10:58:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She came into my life one day
and stopped my world from being grey
Before She came, my heart was dead
and now I've left so much unsaid

I've seen her laugh
I've seen her cry
Her beauty captivates my eye
Across the miles
Across the years
I want to wipe away her fears
Kiss her soft
Hold her tight
Watch her sleep all though the night

But theres another in her heart
So I just smile and play my part
She does deserve a better man
But he won't love her like I can

I know one day She will be gone
And I will have to carry on
But grey skies will not bother me
I'll just look back and think of She [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 2 [informant] => paris [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

She

Contributed by paris on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She came into my life one day
and stopped my world from being grey
Before She came, my heart was dead
and now I've left so much unsaid

I've seen her laugh
I've seen her cry
Her beauty captivates my eye
Across the miles
Across the years
I want to wipe away her fears
Kiss her soft
Hold her tight
Watch her sleep all though the night

But theres another in her heart
So I just smile and play my part
She does deserve a better man
But he won't love her like I can

I know one day She will be gone
And I will have to carry on
But grey skies will not bother me
I'll just look back and think of She

Copyright © paris ... [ 2005-09-19 10:58:35]
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Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by Winterland on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:01:44 PM AEST
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A very beautiful and sad poem! Thank you for sharing.

Jennifer

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:26:05 PM AEST
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o how beautiul that is!! what an amazing flow it has to it! well done
megs
xXx

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 01:04:19 PM AEST
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Beautifully written portraying unrequited love. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by Paris on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 09:00:29 AM AEST
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Thanx for input..i'm glad you liked it
Its the first poem I've ever written

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