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images and idols that have flashed before my eyes
words of useless wonder speaking from the grave
waiting for someone to start a political wave

this moon above my head like a spotlight on this hill
watching all the wonders and the blood that society spills
wanting blindless forever or atleast be shallow sheep
but no as many also who see this dirty heap

to many stories so many flowing words i find within
only darkness in my soul bearing to much sin
not alone do i walk i see this path is truly not alone
but as long as my path is sturdy like a heavy stone
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HAVE you ever felt this WAY?

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:05:31 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

restless in my sleep the moon echoing with shallow tides
images and idols that have flashed before my eyes
words of useless wonder speaking from the grave
waiting for someone to start a political wave

this moon above my head like a spotlight on this hill
watching all the wonders and the blood that society spills
wanting blindless forever or atleast be shallow sheep
but no as many also who see this dirty heap

to many stories so many flowing words i find within
only darkness in my soul bearing to much sin
not alone do i walk i see this path is truly not alone
but as long as my path is sturdy like a heavy stone

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-09-19 02:05:31]
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Re: HAVE you ever felt this WAY? (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 01:39:03 PM AEST
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We all feel that way at times.Look at the moon and see hoe she shines her light.there is hope out there, Ros

Re: HAVE you ever felt this WAY? (User Rating: 1 )
by True-to-the-Heart on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 08:32:46 AM AEST
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i enjoyed the imagery..
the words used are soothing, i find
i like it when the meanings of poems
arent BANG in ya face

good write

Re: HAVE you ever felt this WAY? (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:50:25 PM AEST
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Yes I can so much relate to ur poem dear Regan. Chin up friend for there's still hope.
A talented writer u r, I like ur style. The more I read the more I like. Keep it up.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer

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