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I think I'm falling
Can't you hear me calling
Caught up in this one way trip...relationship
Feet never touch the ground

I'm headed downward
My screams for you go unheard
Falling on the same deaf ears...without you here
The silence is profound

Now I'm so lonely
I second guess, if only
Things could be the way they were...if not for her
You'd be here for me now

Catch me I'm falling
Can't you hear me calling
Goodbye to the pain at last...my life, my past
Slipped through my hands somehow

Catch me I'm falling!
Arms outstretched, tears pouring
My life flashing before me!
As I finally reach the ground

On this one way ticket...down

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Downward Spiral

Contributed by LyricalTearz on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:56:57 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I think I'm falling
Can't you hear me calling
Caught up in this one way trip...relationship
Feet never touch the ground

I'm headed downward
My screams for you go unheard
Falling on the same deaf ears...without you here
The silence is profound

Now I'm so lonely
I second guess, if only
Things could be the way they were...if not for her
You'd be here for me now

Catch me I'm falling
Can't you hear me calling
Goodbye to the pain at last...my life, my past
Slipped through my hands somehow

Catch me I'm falling!
Arms outstretched, tears pouring
My life flashing before me!
As I finally reach the ground

On this one way ticket...down

Copyright © LyricalTearz 9-19-05

Copyright Â© LyricalTearz ... [ 2005-09-19 00:56:57]
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Re: Downward Spiral (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:57:24 AM AEST
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Now this is a masterpiece at its best, Lyrical Tearz..

Well we all have to improve our self image, I see a lot of writes with this intention to cry out, yours is very deeply written, painful.

Hello world, let me in, or off, no matter, I am falling, catch me... sad....

What is it you wish to hear, or do you hear with fear. Unhappiness hurts. It is a problem for sure

Expect more work ahead in your lifetime, the world is large enough to hold all of us, our feelings, our hurts, and while it is holding us from falling, in the meantime we must take better care of our own affairs.

I am one person that will catch you, keep you from falling down, I have a ticket for you to go up..

huggs

Raquel Leah :D

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