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what I did to cause you pain, all the empty promises have no refrain.
I wish I could turn back the past and add just one more chapter to the ending of the book.
I yearn to show you that I am capable of loving the right way.
Despite your dismay, I could actually be thankful for the love you felt and realize that I deserve it as much as the next.
But, the clock tics fast and time came and past, and with it did that feeling that once filled your heart and
slowly I realize, no longer is my memory wanted in any part.

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Lost Time

Contributed by tdp on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 11:54:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Now, much time after, I realized how you felt and how much you hurt;
what I did to cause you pain, all the empty promises have no refrain.
I wish I could turn back the past and add just one more chapter to the ending of the book.
I yearn to show you that I am capable of loving the right way.
Despite your dismay, I could actually be thankful for the love you felt and realize that I deserve it as much as the next.
But, the clock tics fast and time came and past, and with it did that feeling that once filled your heart and
slowly I realize, no longer is my memory wanted in any part.

Copyright © tdp ... [ 2005-09-18 23:54:11]
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Re: Lost Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
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Emotionaly speaking this is heart breaking a
most straight foward approach via the heart . .

Ben

Re: Lost Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:13:31 AM AEST
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I know this feeling well.

"I gave to you my friendship
I gave to you my love
I tried to pull down stars from the heavens above
Yes I've made mistakes
and i've repented of them all

Over all
I've given you my heart"

This quote is from a song i have been working on for almost 10 years. It hurts too much to finish it. Your poem reminds me of how loved ones have shunned me sometimes, Maybe i deserved it but it still hurts. All we can do is grow from it and move on hoping we will get another chance one day. Thanks for sharing this. The name of the song i quoted is said in the last two lines.

Re: Lost Time (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:50:18 AM AEST
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I feel so sad when I read this. Loving the right way is so tricky cause it sometimes seems to be different every day.

Re: Lost Time (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 11:53:42 PM AEST
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Wow great ending there, it has that 'ouch' factor. Well expressed emotions throughout this piece, and written in a way many can identify with.

Scorp.

Re: Lost Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:33:09 PM AEST
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Very well expressed!!! I could feel the emotion and pain as I read. I believe I can relate to this poem too.

Excellent write. Thanks for sharing.

Tim

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