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Array ( [sid] => 10589 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Repetetive Pain [time] => 2003-01-17 13:20:00 [hometext] => * I don't know why the title it just seemed to fit. This is rather sad... just reflects my mood. I hope you enjoy... I hope you enjoy that you don't feel like me. I hope you realize how true all this is. * [bodytext] => I don't know why I feel this way
Why its hard to make it to the next day
Why I feel so broken and worthless
Why I don't feel like a person
Why I feel like an invisible wraith

Every day I feel destroyed and trashed
Like I've burned and crashed
Like I've failed, left without a purpose
Like a ball kicked around and abused
Like I'm a target for disrespect, when all I did was respect

When all I can see are the question marks and tears
I think I've stayed here to many years
I think its time to give in and get some peace
I think I can do without all this *****
I think... I'm confused

When the depression wraps me in its cloak
I realize I can't breathe only choke
I realize just how stupid I really am
I realize how pain really feels
I realize when I want to scream and I can't wash myself clean
And I realize how worthless my life really is [comments] => 8 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 32 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Repetetive Pain

Contributed by bobotheclown on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I don't know why I feel this way
Why its hard to make it to the next day
Why I feel so broken and worthless
Why I don't feel like a person
Why I feel like an invisible wraith

Every day I feel destroyed and trashed
Like I've burned and crashed
Like I've failed, left without a purpose
Like a ball kicked around and abused
Like I'm a target for disrespect, when all I did was respect

When all I can see are the question marks and tears
I think I've stayed here to many years
I think its time to give in and get some peace
I think I can do without all this *****
I think... I'm confused

When the depression wraps me in its cloak
I realize I can't breathe only choke
I realize just how stupid I really am
I realize how pain really feels
I realize when I want to scream and I can't wash myself clean
And I realize how worthless my life really is

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-01-17 13:20:00]
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Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by AnnD on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:39:10 PM AEST
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I know what you are feeling.....but no life is worthless.
From all the bad things and misadventures which cross our paths during our lives......comes the strength to make us what we are and what we will be. No experience is wrong......it just gives us another aspect of life to draw experience from.
I hope all is well with you....you have pennes this well.
Ann

Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by sidra on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST
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I feel like this everyday . I know the feeling no matter what i do it still is the same..

Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:36:14 PM AEST
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this is so sad...joel...you're not worthless, i promise, you of all people, you're not worthless...

Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:34:32 PM AEST
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I feel like that sometimes too. Well I hope you dont feel like that all the time!!

mckayla

Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:35:54 PM AEST
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Joel my friend...worthless?....now..we me an you both know better than this now...who is the one who takes up for me for no reason? who is the one who always has a kind word to say? who is the one that never fails to say hello or hi....you have touched the lives of so many people and i know it doesnt feel like it but you have my friend....and your very special to me...so you get your chin up...and if need to talk you know where i am......your poetry is always deep and touch my soul Joel...keep writing your feelings out....and who you are....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 04:59:14 PM AEST
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you are not worthless your words speak of a pain very many feel... and to those who don't it gives them an idea...how it is for the rest.
I believe in your words and you.

Sharon

Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:21:31 PM AEST
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your not worthless buddy! this was good, and the rhyming, i liked.

Re: Repetetive Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by merge on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 02:00:53 AM AEST
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I can relate to how you feel. I enjoyed your use of a cloak and being trapped. I do agree that pain is a cloak and I think this was a great choice as a symbol.

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