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[aid] => mick
[title] => Thoughts of something that happend yrs ago
[time] => 2005-09-17 16:12:14
[hometext] => Little lengthy, but its a story.....................ALL to the truth
[bodytext] => On a late, cool summer eve Rain was pouring, lightening in the skies, and thunder, rumbling A feeling of calmness was strucken over the 2 story house and family All sitting around, kids playing,and mom and dad reading the eveing paper Then something became, very strange..................... A knock on the door, dad goes to open, and "alas"......No one. So he claimed it on the rain and the drops that were falling heavyily All went back to normal.....Reading the paper and listening to kids, laughter 10 mins, had past..........Another, knock on the door, even louder, than before Mom , steps to the front door, opening, and ...........No one , again Now, this was getting, stranger by the minute Knocks, and the door handle rattling, made the family imagine, many things Was, someone trying to come in out of the rain?! Or, was it really no one there?! Dad, deceides, to open the big, Oak door, and leave the glass screen door, open; Nothing.......... Several hrs had past, and the rain trying to subside Bedtime was in the furture, for all As, we all began to slumber off, to the dreams of the nite The phone, began ringing....... Wehear dad........Voice was becoming louder, and semi distressed Mom, getting a feeling of bad feelings, and great fears Dad, sits the phone down...........with a gasp and sigh; signals for mom to step over to him for conversation A hush amoung the children; you could of heard a pin drop Twenty minutes later...........nothing No mom, no dad............The children , now extremly worried What could of caused the great silence , they occured that nite?! The clock ticking, on the wall....loudly The dog in the hall, barking like he never had before Shhhhhh...........they were coming..........Dad with grim saddness, and mom with tears Not a word was uttered from the kids..Just exhaustion, of being kept in suspense Both starred, at all 5 kids....................Dad went to speak, and words, could not flow Mom tried, and tears had begun falling as water does, when turned on What had happened? Were we going to know Suspense, growing rapily Finally, the eldest, spoke..............May I ask why the dead silence, and pouring of tears?! It had happen..................Dads best friend, had tried to kill himself, and succeded.......... Was told this all happened whilst, in the mist of the pouring rain We could not beleive, what we had just been told! Now.................You tell me; Was the knocking at the door.............Someone trying to let him know.......... Are, was it him? This is a honest, truthful story. I was about 10 yrs old and YES, it was my dad.! I still to this day, do not know what to think on a whole. Thoughts have lingered for yrs..........so I figured I would share. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 31 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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