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Array ( [sid] => 10587 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wasted wish [time] => 2003-01-17 12:40:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem that was broken up from three seperate ones I wrote. well thinking i had none to submit, I thought wrong. [bodytext] => Deep inside I bare a scar.

A mind shattered from a far

I could not dare



Tattooed to my heart.

Soft your face is.

Valued our friendship was.



Mistakes happen often,

Righting wrongs take time,

Hearts mend in secret.



The cool fall fits with my heaven.

Thoughts of you, in Limbo

Everyone can see your hell




The time to live ages with perfection.

Lonely with empty words.

Paying the price for a wish granted

and now die with the pain of love.


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Wasted wish

Contributed by darkkai on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Deep inside I bare a scar.

A mind shattered from a far

I could not dare



Tattooed to my heart.

Soft your face is.

Valued our friendship was.



Mistakes happen often,

Righting wrongs take time,

Hearts mend in secret.



The cool fall fits with my heaven.

Thoughts of you, in Limbo

Everyone can see your hell




The time to live ages with perfection.

Lonely with empty words.

Paying the price for a wish granted

and now die with the pain of love.






Copyright © darkkai ... [ 2003-01-17 12:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Wasted wish (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:08:56 PM AEST
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Oooo i love this....hehe...Wasted wish and how dark it is...your talent shines through your poetry my beautiful friend....thank you for sharing such beauty....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Wasted wish (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:10:17 PM AEST
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A lost love is always hard to bare! Great write! Christina




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