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Blood Thoughts
Contributed by
oreo_kisses
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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the thoughts
of death floating
through out my mind
through out my soul
just like the blood
running threw out
my vital organs
it flows and just doesn't stop
it keeps flowing
what will happen when it ends?
will it come to the same outcome?
will it all be done?
will I no longer exist?
except as a memory
to some?
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2005-09-16 20:16:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blood Thoughts
(User Rating: 1 ) by death_not_be_feared on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 01:50:42 AM AEST (User
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i know what youre feeling and i can relate good write |
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Re: Blood Thoughts
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:44:06 AM AEST (User
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I'll be honest and say it wasn't worth thinking about, let alone submitting here for me to read. How can running blood throw out one's vital organs?
Try to have your writing make sense before you ask people to read and comment - they won't take you or your submissions seriously if you don't, in future. |
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