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Imagination to creation
Contributed by
neha
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:22:54 AM in AEST
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imaginations---
pathways fulfilling desire,
leading road may be filled with fire.
let it be;
hardwork--fire proof vehicle you should hire.
then next is extra knowledge which you should acquire,
this'ill break the continuity of blowing fire,
go ahead;
you'ill find space full of relief,
but practically all this not so brief,
then,personality is another aspect
which one should admire,
what'r you thinking? just hurry now and jump into the fire,
but make one surity about your creation ---it should be beyound your imagination
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neha
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Re: Imagination to creation
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:35:19 AM AEST (User
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Nice, apart from a couple of spelling mistakes. |
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Re: Imagination to creation
(User Rating: 1 ) by viking-2272 on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 12:58:03 PM AEST (User
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verry good i like it |
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