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Array ( [sid] => 105771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => living shadow [time] => 2005-09-15 17:02:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Undeniable desire to bleed
fulfilled painfully with love.
I drink the life touched by the divine
and taste the human wine..

Uncontrollable fire burning wild,
centuries pumping rust in the veins
my need to feed like a need to plant
your seed..

My compromised reality devouring
every hope to rest forever
reminding me of this eternity I didn’t chose.
So beautiful is the night in which I rise
just to walk among the living gods..

The virgin blood comforting my haunted soul
and my fears strengthen my body..

I pretend to die just to watch the mortals cry
and when I rise I ask:
where is your god whom I want to fight..

I have failed to die, failed to cry..
so behold me coming for your blood…

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living shadow

Contributed by wazarov on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:02:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Undeniable desire to bleed
fulfilled painfully with love.
I drink the life touched by the divine
and taste the human wine..

Uncontrollable fire burning wild,
centuries pumping rust in the veins
my need to feed like a need to plant
your seed..

My compromised reality devouring
every hope to rest forever
reminding me of this eternity I didn’t chose.
So beautiful is the night in which I rise
just to walk among the living gods..

The virgin blood comforting my haunted soul
and my fears strengthen my body..

I pretend to die just to watch the mortals cry
and when I rise I ask:
where is your god whom I want to fight..

I have failed to die, failed to cry..
so behold me coming for your blood…

Copyright Â© wazarov ... [ 2005-09-15 17:02:01]
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Re: living shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:34:26 PM AEST
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Hmm... Interesting piece... Keep writing...
Alex

Re: living shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Shade on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:44:06 PM AEST
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I usually don't like hungering for blood poems, but I really enjoyed this one.

Re: living shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:48:00 PM AEST
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Wow!! Dean has risen from the dead!!

Great to see you posting again... Have missed you..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: living shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:26:57 PM AEST
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Interesting, and somehow seductive as well. Reminds me of a vampire fantasy....

Re: living shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:49:26 PM AEST
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i felt that it was abstract as well as dark, and you dont see that very often...i liked a lot...keep writing

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