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Searching Sublimity.

Contributed by remote on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:54:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Achieve a greatness of the stature
that troubles all seem so small.
Achieve a greatness of the spirit
that hurt is just a word.
Achieve the thoughts so calm and pure
that dispair find no place for sure.

Let that be your starting point
to conquer a thousand happier worlds.
Let the lovely flowers bloom
every place you land your step.
Let the wisdom shine so bright
in every word that you take.

Be that whisp of scent
that's not so easily forgotten.
Be a harbinger of smiles
that spreads solace far and wide.
Be all that what you want to be
and let all that things be you.




Copyright © remote ... [ 2005-09-15 09:54:27]
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Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 10:04:06 AM AEST
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I do agree with you... that is what we all should find. But it does not come easy, if it comes at all that is...

Great poem!


Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 02:18:29 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and even more, thruth in it's
most humblest presentatio, lovely poem and
exquisit style.


Ben


Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:03:30 PM AEST
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Nicely executed... The ideas are mine as well...LOL...
Congatulations!


Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:16:01 PM AEST
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Well done!! Sound advice....
May your days be filled with blooming flowers and babbling brooks...
Jenni


Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:42:08 PM AEST
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A beautifully written piece of poetry. So much truth and sound advice. I love how you've brought this one across to your reader. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer


Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 10:07:06 PM AEST
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YAH! A happy and soulful write...............yes, let flowers bloom........yes let the fall time begin and trees begin to turn and all make one .........happy with laughter.!
Loved it....................:)



Brew~


Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:30:36 PM AEST
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A rather profound piece of poetry here. I like your thought process in this write. I'm not personally (usually) a fan of an entire poem being typed in bold. To me, it takes something away from the words, but I know to other poets, it's kind of like their trademark...So, to each their own. Also the periods...I think it's necessary sometimes to include a period, but not throughout an entire write. Again, JMO. Also, 'dispair' is spelled 'despair'. I did enjoy reading this all the same. Good expression, keep it up : )

Scorp.
(Who liked the title btw)


Re: Searching Sublimity. (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:49:30 PM AEST
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You are right Scorp, about almost all your opinions there.

Being a noob, I was just exploring all the html tags, now I have settled for a plain look. Yes despair is spelt wrong, but I get spellings wrong all the time (till I spot it and correct it before posting, and some just escapes).

I write all my poetry in about 10 min to half an hour, right through concept to the finished product, so I get grammar and spellings all messed up, I call it collateral damage.

Periods, punctuations, I am not too sure myself, I use them nonetheless, I'll try and experiment more.

Thanks for your nice constructive comment.

-J




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