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Array ( [sid] => 105728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A total Infant [time] => 2005-09-15 00:13:46 [hometext] => This is a totally brand new attempt at writing off the top of my head. [bodytext] => Being dead to the world there is a essential entrance to embellish,
during the seeding period in the life of a necklace of diamond beads.
Love can splash cool water shells,
upon the facet of the diamonds,
causing enormous amounts of shimmering hue to radiate with a slow slicing burning.
That brings on confusion and embarrassment for the karma inhabiting spontaneously birthed ponds and realms of great deities.
There was a passion beyond the ambiance,
a smell of tears.
And in it stood a wet knight of the sights and visions of loyalty,
to a beloved Queen of sky and air,
everything that stood on the waters of this great sea,
that seems to float within the center of the dark universe.
Only one god had created it from sweet tears and nothing else from all of the beautiful creatures that he had.
The world was made from the fires that made the world.
Sensual splashing dwelled within life created as well.
At first with a burst then preceded by a great vision of another vision.
To experience through life,
sight.
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A total Infant

Contributed by gary on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 12:13:46 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Being dead to the world there is a essential entrance to embellish,
during the seeding period in the life of a necklace of diamond beads.
Love can splash cool water shells,
upon the facet of the diamonds,
causing enormous amounts of shimmering hue to radiate with a slow slicing burning.
That brings on confusion and embarrassment for the karma inhabiting spontaneously birthed ponds and realms of great deities.
There was a passion beyond the ambiance,
a smell of tears.
And in it stood a wet knight of the sights and visions of loyalty,
to a beloved Queen of sky and air,
everything that stood on the waters of this great sea,
that seems to float within the center of the dark universe.
Only one god had created it from sweet tears and nothing else from all of the beautiful creatures that he had.
The world was made from the fires that made the world.
Sensual splashing dwelled within life created as well.
At first with a burst then preceded by a great vision of another vision.
To experience through life,
sight.

Copyright © gary ... [ 2005-09-15 00:13:46]
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Re: A total Infant (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:11:39 AM AEST
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Writting off the top of your head hmmm. well, I must say it was kind of arduous to read because the lines are so incredibly long. But I must say that the imagry is good but you don't bring your point across even in an interpretive manner, if you have a point.

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