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Think with your mind
Contributed by
death_not_be_feared
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:44:08 PM in AEST
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Think with your mind
they're laughing at you
Think with your mind
as you're coming unglued
I don't think where i'm going
and I don't think why
Think with your mind before
you kill them tonight.
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Re: Think with your mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by MLCstar on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:14:01 AM AEST (User
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If you were going for shock value, I will give it to you. I don't see much originality in this poem. It is not bad but it doesn't stand out to me. |
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Re: Think with your mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Twysted_Fate on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:44:40 AM AEST (User
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that was great, thanks... I needed that, can totally relate... goooooooood stuff |
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Re: Think with your mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:33:03 AM AEST (User
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Original or not, I quite liked this, nicely written. |
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