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Array ( [sid] => 105715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Truth shown about out of state love [time] => 2005-09-14 21:06:26 [hometext] => this happens to be about my and my boyfriend now and how i got him too see the truth about the girl from out of state that he was in love with for too many years i got her to trust me and tell me the truth about herself i dont look at this as being mea [bodytext] => there is a boy and a girl
two worlds apart
love brings them together
grows alittle more each year

a new girl comes into the boys life
now it is two worlds together and a third apart
love of the two worlds together
grows alittle more each month

two of them join together to form one world
they know their worlds can't be torn apart
love has brought them together
grows alittle more each day

the first couple is almost completely done
the other girl keeps them apart
their love no longer belongs together
it grows smaller each day

now the second girl is happy cause the boy is now hers to keep
the first relationship was easy to break
win their trust and learn the truth about each person
then show the other person what is going on in front of their face
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 25 [informant] => RebelRose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Truth shown about out of state love

Contributed by RebelRose on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:06:26 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



there is a boy and a girl
two worlds apart
love brings them together
grows alittle more each year

a new girl comes into the boys life
now it is two worlds together and a third apart
love of the two worlds together
grows alittle more each month

two of them join together to form one world
they know their worlds can't be torn apart
love has brought them together
grows alittle more each day

the first couple is almost completely done
the other girl keeps them apart
their love no longer belongs together
it grows smaller each day

now the second girl is happy cause the boy is now hers to keep
the first relationship was easy to break
win their trust and learn the truth about each person
then show the other person what is going on in front of their face




Copyright © RebelRose ... [ 2005-09-14 21:06:26]
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Re: Truth shown about out of state love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 10:11:40 PM AEST
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Well.i can say.......as long as LOVE..and true LOVE is there, yes it can happen and work. YOU can not have a 3rd party. I am kinda confused..........so it was you and him, and then he found her, which was miles with distance;he fell in love and disowned you? Correct? Maybe, I am mis-informed, but.......he found love and it occured with distance! Um was he in love with you.......??And why cant he love someone miles apart.......they can be together, unless he loved you, and lied?~! Please help Distance yes, is a barrier,but if you LOVE enough and its strong, ........It;s not

Brew~


Re: Truth shown about out of state love (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 12:33:57 AM AEST
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So "all is fair in love and war?" Not hardly! You may feel you were doing the right thing for him because you wanted him and have apparently succeeded, but to befriend someone to stab them in the back is two-faced. What will you do when someone decides to do that to you? If he is that easily lead by the nose, I am glad he is yours and not anybody that has a heart.

Rita


Re: Truth shown about out of state love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:32:42 AM AEST
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Rita said it all, really.

Although I'd like to add that I think that this attempt at a poem reflects your childishness, overall.

Good day.


Re: Truth shown about out of state love (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:11:41 AM AEST
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i think u did the right thing in finding out the truth espacilly if that other girl has been lieing to that guy and he was to stupid to see it well it was a good write ttyl byebye oh and by the way read some more of my stuff ok and leave a comment bye bye

DEMON




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