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[aid] => mick
[title] => Waking up next to you
[time] => 2005-09-14 18:18:27
[hometext] => Ahh, L'Amour.. *sighs dreamily* Well, this one starts off as the struggle of having to let the one you love go, even when they have already left you...but as the poem proceeds, the hopeless dreamer finds another hopeless dreamer...and a new love dawns...
[bodytext] => Green tears embellish your memory,
Like the rose kisses you once gave me...
(Why can’t I let you go?)
Oh, decaying hope! Oh, endless sorrow! Oh, pulsating anguish!
OH, HEART!
Feel no more!
This lugubrious shadow hovering over me is unbearable,
And I want to love blindly...
My hands search in the dark oblivion for a kindred spirit,
I only find wretched emptiness,
And the pitiful wetness of my weeping,
Is there nothing more?
Have I finally blinked and died?
Stranger in the shadows of loneliness,
Do you travel the same path and,
Can we walk together, hand in hand?
I beseech you with my tired eyes, silently pleading,
Hold me, as close as two can be...
Love me... if only for a moment...
Remind my heart that there is still hope,
And there is still… someone like you,
Dressed in arabesque robes of celestial adoration,
Your arms outstretched to envelop my shivering body,
Words of tender romance and bliss so readily on your tongue,
I can taste them in your kiss...
The sun is still shining when I close my eyes,
I can feel your heart breathing with mine,
A melody of passion and splendor,
What more could I ask for...
When I wake up with you dreaming next to me?
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 235
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[informant] => FleurdeSang
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 19
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LovePoetry
)
Waking up next to you
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:18:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Green tears embellish your memory,
Like the rose kisses you once gave me...
(Why can’t I let you go?)
Oh, decaying hope! Oh, endless sorrow! Oh, pulsating anguish!
OH, HEART!
Feel no more!
This lugubrious shadow hovering over me is unbearable,
And I want to love blindly...
My hands search in the dark oblivion for a kindred spirit,
I only find wretched emptiness,
And the pitiful wetness of my weeping,
Is there nothing more?
Have I finally blinked and died?
Stranger in the shadows of loneliness,
Do you travel the same path and,
Can we walk together, hand in hand?
I beseech you with my tired eyes, silently pleading,
Hold me, as close as two can be...
Love me... if only for a moment...
Remind my heart that there is still hope,
And there is still… someone like you,
Dressed in arabesque robes of celestial adoration,
Your arms outstretched to envelop my shivering body,
Words of tender romance and bliss so readily on your tongue,
I can taste them in your kiss...
The sun is still shining when I close my eyes,
I can feel your heart breathing with mine,
A melody of passion and splendor,
What more could I ask for...
When I wake up with you dreaming next to me?
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-09-14 18:18:27]
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:25:33 PM AEST
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| when I read this my heart totallly sympathizes, thanks for sharing this poem. |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 07:02:53 PM AEST
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Ma fleur précieuse
vos mots sont ceux des disciples
avec la sagesse et
émotion loin au delà de votre âge
la beauté découle de votre stylo en tant que toujours
magnifique
le petit
I fell in from the begining and was left wanting more ... well done my dear, well done !!!
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:30:31 PM AEST
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Very wonderful writing. And you used one of my favorite words "lugubrious"...lol
Loved reading this and enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
Tim |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by brew on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:05:49 PM AEST
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letting go.and not giving in................it works, and yet doesnt,,,,,,,,,,,,,to hurt, yet make it worse for all to view. beautiful write..........even tho some I didnt quite get.,,but,,i did get.!
brew~ |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:56:04 PM AEST
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ahh a most beautiful peice of writting such longing of the heart and projection of the soul
into a realm of the unatainable and yet most sought after region of the human mind such
a wealth of beautiful writting for us all 2 behold, thank you 4 this artistic gift your poem
bestows upon us all . . .
((((((stephy))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:33:49 AM AEST
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This just expresses so much passion!!
Passion of the heart, passion of just feeling...
Very heartfelt and written with such power! |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:14:43 PM AEST
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Wow. Loved this one stephy. You have such a wonderful way with
words. A talent extraordinaire! This was so deeply touching and
beautiful. Such a joy to read. Bravo!
~Breezy |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:59:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Stephy the "oh" parts at the
beginning brought Shakespeare to mind
although you are far better than he. I just
loved the imagery in this and as always the
poem was written with beauty and care.
Perfect as always my dear poetess.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Waking up next to you
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 06:13:53 PM AEST
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Mi cereza dulce...
Cuán muy ordenado y enigmático.
Una maleta lisa de muchos pasado de años revela los orígenes eternos de este futuro.
Qué beatitud y la alegría que usted debe experimentar; para algo más no merecería encender sobre usted ni aplastar su cuerpo delicado de rojo subió pétalos..
Prodigue sobre mí, esto, mi amor, para soy un único un espejo de sus reflejos divinas...
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