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Another day of heart ache for me
I could never imagine it to have been this hard
To give up and leave

The feeling that I had for you
Where very different from the others
The laughter, smiles and tears I felt
And I thought we were lovers

The tears I’ve wept for you
The laughter that we shared
Whipped away like a crumb on a desk
You will never know how much I really cared
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The day I saw love walk out the door

Contributed by JenJen on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 01:07:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I saw love walk out the door
Another day of heart ache for me
I could never imagine it to have been this hard
To give up and leave

The feeling that I had for you
Where very different from the others
The laughter, smiles and tears I felt
And I thought we were lovers

The tears I’ve wept for you
The laughter that we shared
Whipped away like a crumb on a desk
You will never know how much I really cared




Copyright © JenJen ... [ 2005-09-14 13:07:39]
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Re: The day I saw love walk out the door (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:31:24 PM AEST
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A very interesting poem, maybe you should get it out? Lol. SLipSiX. Good write.


Re: The day I saw love walk out the door (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:44:53 AM AEST
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Bland.

So - you gave up and left, but love walked out the door? I'm confused . . . but not perplexed - this poem troubles my imagination not.

Outta here.


Re: The day I saw love walk out the door (User Rating: 1 )
by loura on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:05:04 PM AEST
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i like it...a lot..

good luck for everything




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