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Array ( [sid] => 105535 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Etched In Stone [time] => 2005-09-12 11:18:41 [hometext] => this is a very simple poem that i wrote in two nights and posted now coz i am sick and on my way to a doctor i hope you all enjoy [bodytext] =>



The wind smells of high heaven

And the breeze carries your kiss

It leaves me happy and enlivened

Adding to all the things I miss

About you when you are away

I miss all the little sweet things that you do

That I cherish every moment, every day

All the little “imperfections” that make you

The girl I love in every single way

Roses cry black tears when I can’t hear your voice

It’s hard to see roses filled with such gloom

They wither like my heart as if they had a choice

But one word from you and the gardens in full bloom

And the voice of my soul sings in rejoice

Because I have you next to me again

Back in my arms where you belong

Close to my heart where you help me mend

Where I can protect you because you make me strong

We are stronger together than we are alone

We are two souls with one will

To make what we have last, to always feel at home

To keep our promise for ever and to make the time go still

To feel like we are meant to be, our destiny etched in stone
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Etched In Stone

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:18:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered







The wind smells of high heaven

And the breeze carries your kiss

It leaves me happy and enlivened

Adding to all the things I miss

About you when you are away

I miss all the little sweet things that you do

That I cherish every moment, every day

All the little “imperfections” that make you

The girl I love in every single way

Roses cry black tears when I can’t hear your voice

It’s hard to see roses filled with such gloom

They wither like my heart as if they had a choice

But one word from you and the gardens in full bloom

And the voice of my soul sings in rejoice

Because I have you next to me again

Back in my arms where you belong

Close to my heart where you help me mend

Where I can protect you because you make me strong

We are stronger together than we are alone

We are two souls with one will

To make what we have last, to always feel at home

To keep our promise for ever and to make the time go still

To feel like we are meant to be, our destiny etched in stone




Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-09-12 11:18:41]
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Re: Etched In Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 12:10:03 PM AEST
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Wow! Good Poem! Keep It up! oh and get well soon! (I'm sick too and just got back from the doctor. lol)


Re: Etched In Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 12:33:34 PM AEST
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Aw, I love this.
So simple, but so precious,
just like love should be.
Feel better : )

Take Care,
Lizzie


Re: Etched In Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:14:27 PM AEST
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i love this one:)

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

p.s. i hope your feeling better now:)


Re: Etched In Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:49:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, I absolutely loved it!


Re: Etched In Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 12:36:32 AM AEST
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Magnificent John!!!

This poem was a real beauty, Im glowing with pride...lol

I especially loved the start, endearing words John.
Your still a brilliant writer i dont know why you doubt yourself. You are a talented soul!!!

Lots of love


Re: Etched In Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 11:40:00 PM AEST
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very very very beautiful poem, i love the title, and message these words bring, amazing write as always, muaw.




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