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Array ( [sid] => 105527 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just passing from here [time] => 2005-09-12 09:31:21 [hometext] => We're all just passing from here. [bodytext] => Doing
The Work that I like to
When I want to
Many things there yet that I want to

going
Go see places
Not always what I want to
and When I want to

Sleeping
I close my eyes
This music sounds so good
I can be any place, I want to

Being
Just being myself
all the time
here and everywhere

Caring
Don't care really
for any hurt, I don't want to
I never mean to

Pausing
once in a while
Admire, the way everything seems
all the treasures around me

Stopping
Let the new beginings to catch up
Reflect, gather that I want to
map out to where I am going to. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 21 [informant] => remote [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Just passing from here

Contributed by remote on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:31:21 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Doing
The Work that I like to
When I want to
Many things there yet that I want to

going
Go see places
Not always what I want to
and When I want to

Sleeping
I close my eyes
This music sounds so good
I can be any place, I want to

Being
Just being myself
all the time
here and everywhere

Caring
Don't care really
for any hurt, I don't want to
I never mean to

Pausing
once in a while
Admire, the way everything seems
all the treasures around me

Stopping
Let the new beginings to catch up
Reflect, gather that I want to
map out to where I am going to.

Copyright © remote ... [ 2005-09-12 09:31:21]
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Re: Just passing from here (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:35:28 AM AEST
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Interesting style, original and it allows for the reader to reflect and compare it to our own lives.
Is english your only language...I feel you know others as well...

Re: Just passing from here (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:49:31 AM AEST
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You make some really good points in your poem that cause the heart to pause for thought.

" Caring
Don't care really
for any hurt, I don't want to
I never mean to"

These lines were really striking to me as a person who tries to care. Your thoughts flowed fluently and with purpose and consitent theme.

Re: Just passing from here (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:21:33 PM AEST
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A nice approach. Self-inflicted Q and A...
Alex

Re: Just passing from here (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:00:57 PM AEST
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filled with peace and beauty:)

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Just passing from here (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 10:21:32 PM AEST
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It is unique in that it allowed me to make my own assumption line to line..
a bit vauge..I thought-

Good write.

B

Re: Just passing from here (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 07:06:25 AM AEST
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There's a typo here, should be read as:

Going
Go see places
Not always where I want to
and when I want to

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