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The sunset is an afternoon delight,
we watch the day slowly melt into night.
We are enveloped in soft summer love.
The graceful palm trees are swaying up above.
Miles and miles of diamond white sand,
you and I are walking hand in hand.
A flock of seagulls rising over the endless blue sea,
in my mind I create a memory.

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SUMMER LOVE

Contributed by Sas on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The sunset is an afternoon delight,
we watch the day slowly melt into night.
We are enveloped in soft summer love.
The graceful palm trees are swaying up above.
Miles and miles of diamond white sand,
you and I are walking hand in hand.
A flock of seagulls rising over the endless blue sea,
in my mind I create a memory.

Copyright © Sas ... [ 2005-09-11 19:44:08]
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Re: SUMMER LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:56:13 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I've never seen the point to a summer romance...you have some pleasant imagery in this (albeit short) write.
Keep it up, and welcome to YPDC!

Scorp.

Re: SUMMER LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:13:47 PM AEST
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Good work Sas.
it brings back a week end at Daytona Beach which is one of my greatest memorys.
huggs,
emy
And welcome to our global family here.

Re: SUMMER LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Brandyx7 on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:46:14 PM AEST
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Ah, summer loves give a sense of comfront and then a give a sense of dreadness. Excellant imagery. And welcome to our site!

Re: SUMMER LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:53:49 PM AEST
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Mm, a very beautiful poem, packed with emotion, I could feel this one in my heart, a very strong write. SLipSiX.

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