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Array ( [sid] => 105493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You're Killing Me! [time] => 2005-09-11 18:19:25 [hometext] => you know anyone like this? I'm sure everyone does. [bodytext] => You're killing me.
You're the razor to my skin.
You're the pain on the outside,
and the pain from within.

You're the rope I'm hanging from.
You're the pills I'm about to take.
You're the demon inside my head
saying that I'm a big mistake.

You're stabbing me with your knife of hate,
and leaving me there to die.
You're my dad, you're supposed to love me,
but you only make me cry.

You're the bridge I'm about to jump.
You're the tree I'm about to hit.
You're the reason I hate myself.
You make me feel like ****.

You're the poison in my drink.
You're the gun up to my head.
I thought you were my father,
you're just the reason why I'm dead!!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 473 [topic] => 6 [informant] => pretty_n_pink [notes] => Mod 9 9/11/05 Bleep word Please bleep the whole word. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You're Killing Me!

Contributed by pretty_n_pink on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:19:25 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You're killing me.
You're the razor to my skin.
You're the pain on the outside,
and the pain from within.

You're the rope I'm hanging from.
You're the pills I'm about to take.
You're the demon inside my head
saying that I'm a big mistake.

You're stabbing me with your knife of hate,
and leaving me there to die.
You're my dad, you're supposed to love me,
but you only make me cry.

You're the bridge I'm about to jump.
You're the tree I'm about to hit.
You're the reason I hate myself.
You make me feel like ****.

You're the poison in my drink.
You're the gun up to my head.
I thought you were my father,
you're just the reason why I'm dead!!!

Copyright © pretty_n_pink ... [ 2005-09-11 18:19:25]
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Re: You're Killing Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:53:50 PM AEST
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wounderfully written depressing poem.

Re: You're Killing Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by PrincessJen on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:59:14 PM AEST
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This poem is really sad and I hope things get better for you. My ex-boyfriend in jail makes me feel this way......and you're right I'm sure many know exactly what this feeld like...Good luck and take care...

Re: You're Killing Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 06:31:08 PM AEST
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nice write i like it

Re: You're Killing Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 02:43:17 PM AEST
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The torment certainly spills out in this one
Good write

Steve

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