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Array ( [sid] => 105466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Murderous Rage [time] => 2005-09-11 05:57:59 [hometext] => Haven't posted for a long time and I'm still over here in Iraq, Please Comment if you have time....Steve [bodytext] =>
I race through the night
With fire they flame
The hate in my eyes
As my mind lives in pain

Hate in my soul
As my heart fades away
Ice on my breath
As my mind fills with pain

I question my heart
As I question my soul
And this murderous rage
That has taken control

I feel the reapers thoughts
And I feel the reapers grief
Intoxicating intuition of a killers deceit

Legends of death
Like a thief in the night
A force that completes me
Like the legends of life

Melancholy thoughts
In a heart filled with rage
The warm sent of blood
As my life my death claims

This legend of murder
Now a myth in my site
I welcome my death
For it gives me new life

In eternity find peace that wont die
~Steve~

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Murderous Rage

Contributed by sride686 on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:57:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I race through the night
With fire they flame
The hate in my eyes
As my mind lives in pain

Hate in my soul
As my heart fades away
Ice on my breath
As my mind fills with pain

I question my heart
As I question my soul
And this murderous rage
That has taken control

I feel the reapers thoughts
And I feel the reapers grief
Intoxicating intuition of a killers deceit

Legends of death
Like a thief in the night
A force that completes me
Like the legends of life

Melancholy thoughts
In a heart filled with rage
The warm sent of blood
As my life my death claims

This legend of murder
Now a myth in my site
I welcome my death
For it gives me new life

In eternity find peace that wont die
~Steve~

Copyright © sride686 ... [ 2005-09-11 05:57:59]
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Re: Murderous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by travisk on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:11:23 AM AEST
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nice and simple, I really liked it.
Good job Steve.

Re: Murderous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:24:03 PM AEST
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Certainly those thoughts have troubled every soldier over there. I hope and pray that when each of you come home that the feelings you had can be sorted through and discarded and you can fit back into your life without those thoughts being harboured in your mind. God bless you each and every one. Steve, stay strong and know that many of us do think of you everyday and appreciate the ungodly tasks of your service to your country.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: Murderous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:08:17 PM AEST
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Steve Im sorry for the silence I do still have your address just having a few things going on here I havent forgotten you. Im praying for the day that your all back here at home.

This poem is beautiful to say the least you touched your emotions with each stroke of the pen

huge hugs
Michelle

Re: Murderous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:29:45 AM AEST
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Steve, this was so.... *ponders for a minute* poetically sad and the emotive content is just outstanding.

I just don't know what to say in this poem. It just makes me sad that our soldiers out there are dying for a war that we would never finish.

Good to see you back.

Hugs,
Jane~

Re: Murderous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 03:17:53 PM AEST
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wow so sad .
I hope your doing ok?

love and hugs

Re: Murderous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:10:15 PM AEST
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chilling steve.... be careful over there:)

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Murderous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:29:31 PM AEST
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wow thats astonishing
i love how it made me feel as though those were my own thoughts and feelings
a great poem
-->Rae

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