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untitled
Contributed by
saha
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:31:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's been so long
you're not coming home
now i know
who you are
now i know
who you're not
i won't stand out and shout
i won't be waiting for you
i won't be wasting my hate on you
i'll run away and hide
even if i have to live in a lie
i won't regret what i left behind
you can't stop me
you're not even real
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saha
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2005-09-10 15:31:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by WAE on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:44:55 PM AEST (User
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I am sorry but I can't say much about your work. I understood that you either split with someone or it is an imaginary someone you said good-bye and the picture of your emotional flow. Good luck!
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by rockergirl94 on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 01:02:48 AM AEST (User
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I would have to say that this poem would make for great song lyrics(if it's not a song already). It would in the sense that its so bold and to the point. I can really picture someone just screaming it out with everything they have.
keep writing, keep hoping
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