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Come Back to Me

Contributed by RAGEyourDREAM on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



So hard not to think about it
It's every step I take
And heaven knows I'm trying
But it gets awfully hard
When your heart is this broken

Visions of your lovely face
As I awake, I have this feeling
That you're here and beside me
How silly of me, I know

All the pain will go away
So I say it, here I am again
I gotta face another day
I'm so tired, I need you once again (oh baby)

How am I suppose to carry on,
I find myself singing the same old song
If you hear me, have it in your heart
But please come back to me (oh baby)

I'll be right here if you need someone
If you hold another I'll be moving on
As easy as said
Just hope that I can see the road

Oh how it's been so long
It seems a lifetime passed
These memories that linger,
Soon as I think they have gone
They've only gotten stronger

And so I'm getting through a day
But every move was made was always you and I together
It's hard to believe Im lonely

Is there gonna be a day
I can see the word to make me better
I know there has to be a way
So if you listen and hear me out oh, baby

How am I suppose to carry on,
I find myself singing the same old song
If you hear me, have it in your heart
But please come back to me (oh baby)

I'll be right here if you need someone
If you hold another I'll be moving on
As easy as said
Just hope that I can see the road

You're one in a million,
Dunno how we got so wrong
I thought it was so simple then
Now I know, now I know, how it goes
To let it go

Can there be a chance for you and I?
Before I really make up my mind
Oh how I miss you
I never would kiss you
I'm speaking it from my heart

How am I supposed to carry on,
I find myself singing the same old song
If you hear me, have it in you heart

I'll be right here if you need someone
If you hold another I'll be moving on
Just hope that I can see the road
Come back to me baby




Copyright © RAGEyourDREAM ... [ 2005-09-10 14:27:22]
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Re: Come Back to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:35:48 PM AEST
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I would consider more work on this song.


Re: Come Back to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:02:35 PM AEST
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This song expresses a lot of feeling but something is missing. There is no driving rhythym for the reader to follow. Consider the words to this song by one of my favorite artists.

"When we use to say good night
I'd ofetn kiss and hold you tight
but lately you don't seem to care
you close the door and leave me
standing there
oh honey that's not fair
That's it
I quit
I'm moving on"

I hope this helps.


Re: Come Back to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:28:21 AM AEST
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With all these words all you are conveying is "come back" there has to be more convincing arguements in few words to hold attention.


Re: Come Back to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by just-b on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:54:55 AM AEST
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nice write! definitely from the heart and coming from a place we all have been




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