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[sid] => 105380
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Simply Said
[time] => 2005-09-09 14:01:33
[hometext] => Well...this isn't my usual, I guess...but it needed to get out just the same
[bodytext] => I love you...
for who you are
I love you...
for who you're not
If you need
to further
push me
away
just so
you
feel better
then please,
continue
I still care
nothing's changed
If giving
a damn
equals
'crazy'
Then I'm guilty
as sin
If hurting is
your forte
Then please,
continue
on this way
Try as you
might
My heart
won't budge
When I've had
enough
I'll
move on
BUT...
not a moment before
[comments] => 24
[counter] => 1228
[topic] => 55
[informant] => hauntedscorp
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 225
[ratings] => 46
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => dedicatedpoems
)
Simply Said
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 02:01:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I love you...
for who you are
I love you...
for who you're not
If you need
to further
push me
away
just so
you
feel better
then please,
continue
I still care
nothing's changed
If giving
a damn
equals
'crazy'
Then I'm guilty
as sin
If hurting is
your forte
Then please,
continue
on this way
Try as you
might
My heart
won't budge
When I've had
enough
I'll
move on
BUT...
not a moment before
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
... [
2005-09-09 14:01:33]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Simply Said
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 02:13:57 PM AEST
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| (((((((((( Scorpenatoreriffic ! ! ! )))))))))) |
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Re: Simply Said
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 02:58:27 PM AEST
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Scorpy, I love this. I know these feelings exactly. Just because someone does not love you, does not mean you cannot love them. I like that someone finally said those words. I really admire this write.
Rita |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 03:06:05 PM AEST
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| Scorpenatoreriffic, I am in complete agreement with Rita. :) |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 05:27:00 PM AEST
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Even if it's not your normal, I think it was amazing, it's good to expand on the type's of your writting and obviously you can. Great write, keep it up, can't wait to see more.
- Cassy |
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Re: Simply Said
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by brew on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 08:00:43 PM AEST
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Welp scorp, that is SOOOOOOOOOOO true, yet it does hurt, when the feeling isnt mutal.! But, thats so life. Wonderful inner write.! Loved it
Brew~ |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 09:17:57 PM AEST
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Talented and clever Miss. I absolutely love this Scorp. Your work is always a pleasure to read. Sue just wishes that Scorp's heart finds a good and loving keeper :-)
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: Simply Said
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 10:29:48 PM AEST
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awesomew write, scorp. as always. you just have a way with your writing. just awesome writing, even if it is a dif style. great write though! keep it up!
~sprints |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 10:51:35 PM AEST
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Yes you said it all .Simply Said
well done scorpy.
love and hugs |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Caged Soul on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:55:26 AM AEST
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I love it. it's touchy, real and involving the reader with every line.
Love ya!
~souLBro~ |
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Re: Simply Said
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by tonydread on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 09:00:45 AM AEST
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| realy good best poem so for not usual thin is their worse r btr |
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Re: Simply Said
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:49:31 AM AEST
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Scorp this was just one heck of a powerful poem. The outpouring of emotions here were just sensational.
I could totally relate to this poem. We have been through them and we’ve come out stronger from them.
Nicely done poetry as always.
Jane~ |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 09:25:40 PM AEST
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this is tearful so innocent and beautiful as
always u r truly a treasure . . .
Ben (((((((scorp)))))))) |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Mangos on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:19:09 PM AEST
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this was one of the best most real poems i have ever read, i felt every word, and evey word let beutifully to the next,
thank you
thank you so much
for sharing
you must be a wonderful person |
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Re: Simply Said
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by CarolinaBlue on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:05:15 AM AEST
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Scorp, this was a beautiful outpouring of raw emotion. I know how hard it is to love someone who at times doesn't seem to love you back. You couldn't have said it any better...Kudos to you and good luck on this journey. I'll be routing for ya.
~Blue~ |
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Re: Simply Said
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:32:32 AM AEST
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Fantastic heartfelt emotions written so well.
((HUGS)))
love Angelxxx |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 11:09:40 PM AEST
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Oh wow, good job.. I love the entirety of this write, it is complete.
The ending really shows your strength in character for who you really are.
Only thing I want to say to you is this. Somebody out there will be a very happy and blessed person, if they should ever find you. It will be total love. You are just that, love.
Be sweet, be well...
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 01:47:27 AM AEST
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Oh, how familiar those feelings are to me.
Wonderfully written. I truly love this poem.
Excellent work. |
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Re: Simply Said
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:08:15 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings...
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Willofree on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:04:14 PM AEST
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A unique and creative format and style. It really accentuates each salient point that you so expertly make regarding your love. Each thought is out in the open so to speak, which gives it more potentcy.
Very powerful write, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:32:19 PM AEST
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Scorp, this is a bit different for you..
Great rhyming scheme..and diction too..
Your message shines through though-
..right on through-
As Always-
Billy |
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Re: Simply Said
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:47:37 AM AEST
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| brilliant write I love the format and everthing ,,my hats off to you ,me |
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Re: Simply Said
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by tdp on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:48:45 PM AEST
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| this is the true essence of love.. very well expressed... hurtful when it is not reciprocated or when someone can not love themselves enought to love you the way you may deserve. |
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Re: Simply Said
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:32:11 PM AEST
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Beautifully written and it flowed amazingly.. Real raw emotions.. great job
christina |
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Re: Simply Said
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th February 2019 @ 03:31:12 AM AEST
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Keeping it real....
This is the way it usually goes down.
A scorchingly great write. |
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