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Array ( [sid] => 105352 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => **Die for love** [time] => 2005-09-09 00:59:53 [hometext] => Damien. I can move on now. I hope ill be alright... [bodytext] => If i could die for love, I think i would.
I cant feel that anymore.
im weak, i know i should.
Lying on my bedroon floor.
try and forget the pain
listen to our favorite song
just me against the rain.
I'll remember what you taught me.
And i'll remember when you leave.
I'll remember the last time
When your words i could believe.
When you told me that you loved me
While you looked into my eyes.
And you were the last person
I thought would bring me to demise.
I try to keep the pain inside.
I try my hardest not to bleed.
But look at all this ***** that happened.
And you did it all to me.
You were the only one i could count on
to bring me back to life.
You were the only one that loved me.
Now i can never be alright. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Lollypopxcore [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

**Die for love**

Contributed by Lollypopxcore on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 12:59:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If i could die for love, I think i would.
I cant feel that anymore.
im weak, i know i should.
Lying on my bedroon floor.
try and forget the pain
listen to our favorite song
just me against the rain.
I'll remember what you taught me.
And i'll remember when you leave.
I'll remember the last time
When your words i could believe.
When you told me that you loved me
While you looked into my eyes.
And you were the last person
I thought would bring me to demise.
I try to keep the pain inside.
I try my hardest not to bleed.
But look at all this ***** that happened.
And you did it all to me.
You were the only one i could count on
to bring me back to life.
You were the only one that loved me.
Now i can never be alright.

Copyright © Lollypopxcore ... [ 2005-09-09 00:59:53]
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Re: **Die for love** (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobManning on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 12:34:33 AM AEST
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This poem reminds me of my own situation now, you feel like you can't go on, and you want so bad to believe that "time does heal all" but it doesn't... yet, one day though, maybe it will, thank you for sharing

Re: **Die for love** (User Rating: 1 )
by Ivy on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:57:02 AM AEST
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nice write. u have said it all in this ode. Things will surely be fine...

Re: **Die for love** (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:59:32 AM AEST
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In a way, it seems like you already died for love. Death by love... pain that never leaves. By far the slowest and most painful of deaths.
Take care, be strong.
David

Re: **Die for love** (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:36:20 AM AEST
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I've been through this. Been through the same pain. Been through the same heartache. Been through the same disappointment. I really love this piece. Thank you so much for sharing.

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