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STILL IN SHOCK

Contributed by emystar on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:46:06 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy
















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OH FATHER,
For all generocity, we say,
God will bless you today.
We're blessed so much now.
We gotta help them somehow.

Humbly we bow
trying to understand how.
Still in shock for people's soul
Distruction every where they go.
Humbly we bow
Please get um all out.

Let them feel our aching luv
As u interceed with heavenly doves.
Our heart's we open wide.
Let your omnipitent luv abide.

We open our homes to relieve
As aching heart's luved ones grieve.
Let us sow your seeds of compassion
Share our hevenly rations.

Wrap them in your gracious touch
Show them we luv them much.







Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-09-08 05:46:06]
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:12:33 AM AEST
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Emy this is a beautiful tribute to this sad natural disaster that's happened. My prayers go out to all the victims of this disaster. May God be with them always.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:59:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful write for those devastated souls affected by this tragedy...

Now's the time to ban together as one.


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:01:56 AM AEST
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A really touching prayer for the victims of Katrina...I am still trying to imagine their lives now....
Hugs an Luv...
Jenni


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:19:21 AM AEST
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Beautifully Written. They need all the help that we can give, one and all.


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:46:27 AM AEST
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So heart-warming a poem this is Emystar.
Your love and emphathy with the suffering shines in every line.

I wrote too something, and posted it with the short stories, but mine is real "Grim"
Oh very "Grim" to read.

.http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Mem_Stories&file=article&sid=199

Thank you for your beautiful poem. A repose for the soul.
Elizabeth


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:05:18 PM AEST
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what a wonderful tribute to the people .
awsome job.


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:45:27 PM AEST
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I like your heart in this poem. Thanks for helping and not complaining.


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 09:37:44 AM AEST
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I totally understand what you meant Emy. I am still in shick with all that's happening out there. I wish i could help out and put them all in new houses so that people wont rape them or kill them.

It's just a sad sad thing to happen to them. Nicely written poem Emy.

Hugs,
Jane~


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:11:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Emmy. May god help them all.
In my prayers
Amen

Love Angelxxxx


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:52:38 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem/prayer on behalf of those who are suffering in the aftermath of that terrible storm. A heartfelt show of love and caring.

A wonderful tribute to those who are suffering, and a show of support. Thanks for sharing this emy.

Will


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:10:52 PM AEST
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A lovely write that shows you care.
Sometimes mother nature can be so cruel, but if we all stick together in times of crisis we can still prevail

Steve


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:30:02 PM AEST
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Emy, a beautiful, heartfelt, much needed poem. I live in central Florida and we still have a lot of houses with tarps instead of roofs after last year, and one neighborhood that's still flooded. We received so much love, help, and prayers from all over the country that helped us push on and we'll never forget. My heart goes out to all those affected and to the disruption of their lives.
This was a beautiful tribute, thanks for writing it.

peace and hugs my friend, john


Re: STILL IN SHOCK (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:38:08 AM AEST
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When ever I read your poetry i am often surprisedat how much you pray for people in your poetry. That is always a positive influence on me.




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