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Array ( [sid] => 105270 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who, What, When, Where, Why and How? [time] => 2005-09-07 22:33:06 [hometext] => Just some randoms thoughts about my friends' relationship. I'd love for her to see what she could have if only she deemed herself worthy. [bodytext] => Who do I have to be?
Who is it you want, her or me?
Who do you honestly love?
Who is it that you let pick up the pieces after she breaks your heart in the name of love?

What is it she gives you that I can't?
What makes you so blinded to who she really is?
What can I do?
Is there anyway to show you?
What will it take to for you to finally have enough of her and make your last stand?
What makes you think that you don't deserve better and keeps you putting yourself through this?

When will it happen?
When will you finally see?
When will you protect your heart from her?
When will it be time for your heart to finally mend?
When will you put a stop to the hell she imposes upon you?
When will you finally walk out that door, if you do will you just go back for more?
When you set yourself free,
That's when you'll finally see that for her love simply won't do,

After she crushes your spirits and breaks your heart, where will you go?
Where will she be, when you come to me?
I'd like to know before i pick up the pieces yet again,
Honestly where does your heart belong?
Where does it go, with her or with me?
Where . . . do you even know?

Why?
Why do you continue to try?
Why can't you see?
Why won't you find someone who's worthy?
Why don't you cut your loses?
Why can't you just walk away?
Why not avoid the heartache?
Why don't you register the heartache she causes?

How can I hide these feelings for you?
How can you not see what she's done to you?
How can I sit and console you knowing that you'll keep going back . . . you always do,
How can you not see that i suffer as you do?
How can I continue to hide my love for you?
How do you love her so?
How could you not know?
The way you feel for her, it's me that feels for you
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Who, What, When, Where, Why and How?

Contributed by Emotionally_Muted on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 10:33:06 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



Who do I have to be?
Who is it you want, her or me?
Who do you honestly love?
Who is it that you let pick up the pieces after she breaks your heart in the name of love?

What is it she gives you that I can't?
What makes you so blinded to who she really is?
What can I do?
Is there anyway to show you?
What will it take to for you to finally have enough of her and make your last stand?
What makes you think that you don't deserve better and keeps you putting yourself through this?

When will it happen?
When will you finally see?
When will you protect your heart from her?
When will it be time for your heart to finally mend?
When will you put a stop to the hell she imposes upon you?
When will you finally walk out that door, if you do will you just go back for more?
When you set yourself free,
That's when you'll finally see that for her love simply won't do,

After she crushes your spirits and breaks your heart, where will you go?
Where will she be, when you come to me?
I'd like to know before i pick up the pieces yet again,
Honestly where does your heart belong?
Where does it go, with her or with me?
Where . . . do you even know?

Why?
Why do you continue to try?
Why can't you see?
Why won't you find someone who's worthy?
Why don't you cut your loses?
Why can't you just walk away?
Why not avoid the heartache?
Why don't you register the heartache she causes?

How can I hide these feelings for you?
How can you not see what she's done to you?
How can I sit and console you knowing that you'll keep going back . . . you always do,
How can you not see that i suffer as you do?
How can I continue to hide my love for you?
How do you love her so?
How could you not know?
The way you feel for her, it's me that feels for you




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Re: Who, What, When, Where, Why and How? (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 10:40:52 PM AEST
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such a sweet poem and i like the creative use of the how why when what and who. great job.


Re: Who, What, When, Where, Why and How? (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 09:57:13 PM AEST
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Well done, I enjoyed the read.

The Phantom




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