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Array ( [sid] => 105264 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused [time] => 2005-09-07 21:19:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I didn't like you at first
and now I don't know what to do
I get really happy
whenever I get to see you

I get scared when i'm around you
I just don't know what to do
I feel as thought i like you
but then I have no clue

at first I liked your friend
but that was only until
I realized that it would have to end
it just wasn't meant to be

he didn't like me
like I liked him
that's the way things had to be
cuz he liked my friend

I still think he's cute
but let's all be quiet
I want to keep that
between me and you

I think I would be better with you
then I would with him
but I have no clue
what I should do

I hurt a friend once
cuz I liked a boy as she did
I felt really bad
now all we can do is kid

I hurt her once
I don't want to do it again
she's like a sister to me
that's the way I want it to be

I will still like you
and of course your friend
but until I know what to do
it will remain at an end
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 2 [informant] => undiscoveredshadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Confused

Contributed by undiscoveredshadow on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 09:19:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I didn't like you at first
and now I don't know what to do
I get really happy
whenever I get to see you

I get scared when i'm around you
I just don't know what to do
I feel as thought i like you
but then I have no clue

at first I liked your friend
but that was only until
I realized that it would have to end
it just wasn't meant to be

he didn't like me
like I liked him
that's the way things had to be
cuz he liked my friend

I still think he's cute
but let's all be quiet
I want to keep that
between me and you

I think I would be better with you
then I would with him
but I have no clue
what I should do

I hurt a friend once
cuz I liked a boy as she did
I felt really bad
now all we can do is kid

I hurt her once
I don't want to do it again
she's like a sister to me
that's the way I want it to be

I will still like you
and of course your friend
but until I know what to do
it will remain at an end

Copyright © undiscoveredshadow ... [ 2005-09-07 21:19:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 12:51:00 AM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel happened to me
its like your telling him how you feel exactly like you just talking to him.
and never i mean never (well in my opinion sry) speak of anothe guy to a guy you like.are his friend and him the same? maybe thats why you like his friend now that that guy is not available to you so you go his his friend my friend did that to me b4 he was with my bestfriend because i didnt like him and i was with aanother guy so he went out with my bff and were almost the same person.
but i mean i didnt care at all.but just dont hurt this guy get your feeling strait if he likes you too cause if he does and ur just falling for his friend then....well....your gonna hurt him...i know its none of my bussiness though sorry i was just telling you about me and my opinion....thanks for reading my (really really) long comment lol
Later'

great write..
Dee,

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