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Array ( [sid] => 105242 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can remember [time] => 2005-09-07 16:04:45 [hometext] => This poem is dedicated to my close friend Ben, i just wanna say thank you so much for being here for me and you mean the world to me! thnx comments welcome but if you dont like it o well this is how i feel! :D [bodytext] => I can remember the very first time I cried
Lost sleep worrying over you and others
I can remember the very first time you made me laugh
Made me smile when I was down

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time we talked
How much of an embarrassment you caused
I can remember the very first time we met
And how the man wanted to beat us up

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time we went to park
Where you got stuck up a tree
I can remember the very first time we helped each other out
With our problems

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time we had a laugh
When we showed each other photo’s
I can remember the very first time I saw your face
How much older you looked from the photo’s

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time I threw a sweet at you
Yet I still missed whilst standing behind you
I can remember the very first you smiled
A very cheeky lil grin

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I remember happy memories
As I remember the bad
I have a feeling we will have more fights
But I also know

We WILL pull through

-xXx-
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I can remember

Contributed by JenJen on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 04:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I can remember the very first time I cried
Lost sleep worrying over you and others
I can remember the very first time you made me laugh
Made me smile when I was down

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time we talked
How much of an embarrassment you caused
I can remember the very first time we met
And how the man wanted to beat us up

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time we went to park
Where you got stuck up a tree
I can remember the very first time we helped each other out
With our problems

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time we had a laugh
When we showed each other photo’s
I can remember the very first time I saw your face
How much older you looked from the photo’s

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I can remember the very first time I threw a sweet at you
Yet I still missed whilst standing behind you
I can remember the very first you smiled
A very cheeky lil grin

You make me smile
Like I’ve never smiled before
You can make me cry
Of happiness not of fear

I remember happy memories
As I remember the bad
I have a feeling we will have more fights
But I also know

We WILL pull through

-xXx-




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Re: I can remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 07:03:24 PM AEST
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Sweet poem and tribute to your friend. Nice work.


Re: I can remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Pwei on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:05:24 PM AEST
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Interesting stuff...


Re: I can remember (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 04:17:24 PM AEST
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thats really sweet jens! ben'll love it




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