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Array ( [sid] => 105240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Game Over (Song) [time] => 2005-09-07 15:34:03 [hometext] => ♥..Spare me just three last words..♥ [bodytext] => "Hey there," I say into the phone,
"Why are you calling me?" you say,
and I fell like you just crushed all my bones.
I hang up and dial,
but there's no answer,
and help is vital.

Cuz' I'm feeling down,
and feeling left out,
and this game's over,
without a doubt.
Cuz' life really is just a game,
but there's no restart,
and nobody to blame.

I know we said it's over,
but in my life,
it's not just gonna blow over.
Cuz' I still love you,
and it's hard for me to say,
but it's true.

I'm feeling down,
and feeling left out,
and this game's over,
without a doubt.

Yeah, this game's over,
I've got the gun,
and this game's over. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 36 [informant] => JustAGirl001 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Game Over (Song)

Contributed by JustAGirl001 on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 03:34:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

"Hey there," I say into the phone,
"Why are you calling me?" you say,
and I fell like you just crushed all my bones.
I hang up and dial,
but there's no answer,
and help is vital.

Cuz' I'm feeling down,
and feeling left out,
and this game's over,
without a doubt.
Cuz' life really is just a game,
but there's no restart,
and nobody to blame.

I know we said it's over,
but in my life,
it's not just gonna blow over.
Cuz' I still love you,
and it's hard for me to say,
but it's true.

I'm feeling down,
and feeling left out,
and this game's over,
without a doubt.

Yeah, this game's over,
I've got the gun,
and this game's over.

Copyright © JustAGirl001 ... [ 2005-09-07 15:34:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Game Over (Song) (User Rating: 1 )
by JustAGirl001 on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:17:38 PM AEST
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Please Comment. Please and Thank You. Lolz. Thanx.
Bleeding with you,
Emma♥

Re: Game Over (Song) (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:22:38 PM AEST
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Hey, not bad at all!

Re: Game Over (Song) (User Rating: 1 )
by slightly_broken on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:34:24 PM AEST
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that was awesome! great writing!

Re: Game Over (Song) (User Rating: 1 )
by NoangelNohope on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 07:32:11 PM AEST
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i like this song...it really fits what goes through a girls mind when break ups occur, especially when dumped...its like i might not be with you anymore, but your really still mine...good job! :)

Re: Game Over (Song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST
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wow. I loved this. Good write and i can totally relate on this. I know this feeling very well. Wish i could just make my game be over sometimes. Thanks for sharing. Good write again

Re: Game Over (Song) (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:19:54 PM AEST
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wow
i love this! i could never write nething this good. plz dont really kill yourself tho cuz i love you

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