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consumes most of me

Sweetness is there
but turning sour

waiting and wanting
dreaming and hoping
something happens to me
worth while

the next day always gets here
and nothing new
nothing changed
everything the very same

I feel excitment every
now and then
it passes over

something begins
yet sadly it ends
broken hearts that never can mend

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sadly it all ends

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 12:55:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

Anger, resentment and jealousy
consumes most of me

Sweetness is there
but turning sour

waiting and wanting
dreaming and hoping
something happens to me
worth while

the next day always gets here
and nothing new
nothing changed
everything the very same

I feel excitment every
now and then
it passes over

something begins
yet sadly it ends
broken hearts that never can mend

JENNI

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2005-09-07 12:55:31]
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Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 01:07:26 PM AEST
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Good flow on this Jenni.
I also like the idea that things cycle, even within cycles.
Nicely written.

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 03:43:44 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. I think the broken heart theme comes in late then the poem suddenly ends. The message still gets across though.

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:38:55 PM AEST
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Wow!!! I just love the way you wrote this Jen, the rhyming was perfection.

Good write hon

Jane~

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 11:13:51 AM AEST
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Great write. I thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you

Tim

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:23:02 AM AEST
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Good job expressing yourself here Jenni. This piece kept a good flow with the rhymes, and your feelings are relatable.
Love that last stanza: )

Scorp.

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:29:17 PM AEST
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I can so much relate to ur poem. A very well written piece of poetry u have presented us with Jenni. I hope things brighten up for u.
*hugs*
Sue

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:06:11 PM AEST
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Wow Jenni, just stumbled across this. . .

I agree with the others, the flow is definitely notable.
Also, you portrayed your feelings and thoughts
to the reader well throughout this.

I think I like the last stanza the best. :D

Great work, keep writing!

~KayT
(who is off to 'stumble' across more of your works. . .)

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 09:49:00 PM AEST
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I hear ya on this one for sure jenni but joy cometh in the morning.
We all have these days, I'm sure.
Keep the faith, friend!
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: sadly it all ends (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:33:46 AM AEST
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Quite beautiful yet sad poem this is, of course very nicely presented with your usual ammount of conviction. Perhaps someone will come along sooner or later. Mean while don't despair, wheather in love or not, married or not, life offers an abundant source of thing's for us to take hold of, we just have to know what to hold on to and what to let go of. Lovely writting along with such sincerity.

myheartsvoice

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