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Array ( [sid] => 105191 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Carry Broken Cross [time] => 2005-09-06 22:34:24 [hometext] => please comment...... jennie* [bodytext] => Restrict from me happiness
Take from me life
Deep in my back
You stab with a knife
Pools of dark blood
Swamp at my feet
As I do surrender
To my defeat
Somewhere inside
You insist is a soul
But how could it be
When you are so cold
Carry on shoulders
A broken cross
Resurrection of me
Leaves you no loss
Finality of time
Have you no shame
In the end of it all
You know not my name
But can you see me smile
So forged and so fake
With but tears in my eyes
Life was my mistake
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Carry Broken Cross

Contributed by blue_angel on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:34:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Restrict from me happiness
Take from me life
Deep in my back
You stab with a knife
Pools of dark blood
Swamp at my feet
As I do surrender
To my defeat
Somewhere inside
You insist is a soul
But how could it be
When you are so cold
Carry on shoulders
A broken cross
Resurrection of me
Leaves you no loss
Finality of time
Have you no shame
In the end of it all
You know not my name
But can you see me smile
So forged and so fake
With but tears in my eyes
Life was my mistake

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-09-06 22:34:24]
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Re: Carry Broken Cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:51:28 PM AEST
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comments shouldnt be asked for, but should be deserved, otherwise how do you know how many comments your poem deserved otherwise?

Re: Carry Broken Cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 09:53:46 PM AEST
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Amen to that.

Re: Carry Broken Cross (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear_baby_1988 on Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 10:43:43 AM AEST
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thank u for shareing

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