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Array ( [sid] => 105186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the good and bad, of life [time] => 2005-09-06 21:32:56 [hometext] => Trying to capture the good and bad, we always wish that the good would oppress the bad. I attempted, let me know if i succeeded. [bodytext] => Although life is like a dream,
Do we ever truly know what it means?

Twisting and winding through curves,
Fighting each other with words.

And more.

How lovely the sky when blue,
Holding one another, so true.

Hot fire that burns,
How quickly life turns.

On broken vows.

Try to see light,
Gaze in wonder at night.

Burn with frustration,
Hate concentration.

If only life were simple.

Decisions unworthy,
Questions deserving.

Pure bliss,
Light kiss.

Searching for a niche of our own.

Small places,
Familiar faces.

Dark desire,
Blazing fire.

All of which we crave.

Life can be great,
Scheming fate.

Life can be bad,
So sad.

If only loved moments could remain.
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the good and bad, of life

Contributed by AshRayne on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:32:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Although life is like a dream,
Do we ever truly know what it means?

Twisting and winding through curves,
Fighting each other with words.

And more.

How lovely the sky when blue,
Holding one another, so true.

Hot fire that burns,
How quickly life turns.

On broken vows.

Try to see light,
Gaze in wonder at night.

Burn with frustration,
Hate concentration.

If only life were simple.

Decisions unworthy,
Questions deserving.

Pure bliss,
Light kiss.

Searching for a niche of our own.

Small places,
Familiar faces.

Dark desire,
Blazing fire.

All of which we crave.

Life can be great,
Scheming fate.

Life can be bad,
So sad.

If only loved moments could remain.

Copyright © AshRayne ... [ 2005-09-06 21:32:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the good and bad, of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Moshi_Moshi on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:41:13 PM AEST
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Great poem! Yeah, you did a good job of capturing the good and bad.

Re: the good and bad, of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:04:53 PM AEST
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You took a perfect picture of life with your words.

Re: the good and bad, of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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This is quite compelling, and finely-written. Excellent musings upon this (so strange) life of ours.

Keep it up.

Andrew

Re: the good and bad, of life (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:04:53 PM AEST
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If only loved moments could remain..........Sums it up .as a WHOLE............very true write. thanks for sharing

Brew~

Re: the good and bad, of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 08:44:38 AM AEST
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this is beautiful a lot of thruth and wisdom here though sadly all things pass with time . .

Ben

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