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Array ( [sid] => 105164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love's First Love [time] => 2005-09-06 15:48:04 [hometext] => Please read and comment [bodytext] => I thought that I had been in love before
But when I met you I knew I never had been
You make me feel like no one could
I have never loved any one but you
I know
Because I have never hurt so much
Just because I miss some one
And no matter how much I hurt
One word from you and it all fades
I love so many things about you
And love you so much
I love the way you talk to me
No voice has ever sound so sweet
I want to cry when I hear just
A murmur or sadness in it
And would do anything I could
To make the pain fade away
Like what you do for me

When I am down your laugh lifts me up
I would do any thing to hear your voice
From the moment I open my eyes
When I wake up in the morning
To the moment I am next to you
And close my eyes and try to fall asleep
But all I could do is listen to you breathe

If I could I would bring you flowers every day
Flowers of all kinds for the most
Beautiful flower of them all
The one I love the most
No flower’s fragrance or
The beauty of a rose could
Inspire me as much as you
Or brought me such sweet memories
I could never long to feel the
The touch of a petals caress
As I do to feel the softness of
Your hands on my face
Or your lips on my tired desperate brow

I love the way your hair smells
It's how angels should smell
You are how an angel should be
I thought I knew what true beauty was
And then I saw you and you gave the term
Brand new meaning
Perfect can never begin to describe you
Your smile alone is enough
To make any one fall a thousand times
Just like I do every day
Some one who has lost their faith
Can look in your eyes and know
That heaven exists
They would feel that as long as
They can look into your eyes
Heaven is never far away
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Love's First Love

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 03:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



I thought that I had been in love before
But when I met you I knew I never had been
You make me feel like no one could
I have never loved any one but you
I know
Because I have never hurt so much
Just because I miss some one
And no matter how much I hurt
One word from you and it all fades
I love so many things about you
And love you so much
I love the way you talk to me
No voice has ever sound so sweet
I want to cry when I hear just
A murmur or sadness in it
And would do anything I could
To make the pain fade away
Like what you do for me

When I am down your laugh lifts me up
I would do any thing to hear your voice
From the moment I open my eyes
When I wake up in the morning
To the moment I am next to you
And close my eyes and try to fall asleep
But all I could do is listen to you breathe

If I could I would bring you flowers every day
Flowers of all kinds for the most
Beautiful flower of them all
The one I love the most
No flower’s fragrance or
The beauty of a rose could
Inspire me as much as you
Or brought me such sweet memories
I could never long to feel the
The touch of a petals caress
As I do to feel the softness of
Your hands on my face
Or your lips on my tired desperate brow

I love the way your hair smells
It's how angels should smell
You are how an angel should be
I thought I knew what true beauty was
And then I saw you and you gave the term
Brand new meaning
Perfect can never begin to describe you
Your smile alone is enough
To make any one fall a thousand times
Just like I do every day
Some one who has lost their faith
Can look in your eyes and know
That heaven exists
They would feel that as long as
They can look into your eyes
Heaven is never far away




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Re: Love's First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 04:22:31 PM AEST
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Very nice strong affectionate poetry here
Very possessively drawn out.. reflecting old wounds healed . A heart that was about to dry up and wither. Your heart sings melodically to your impelling urge to keep this flawless true love, shouting weeping for joy, soft and gentle cries

This write teaches a dwelling place where there is absolute loyalty and trust..

It is very beautiful poetry

Raquel Leah





Re: Love's First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:04:53 PM AEST
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I agree...very beautiful indeed.

I still have it on my computer since you sent it to me..and Ive read it over and over lol.

It is awesome, you have a captivating way of conveying your endearing emotions.

Does draw the readers soul in very well...!


Re: Love's First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:45:32 PM AEST
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I agree w/ Punka_Rach, and amazingly beautiful portrial of emotions, i love it,


Re: Love's First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by my_dark_paradise on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 11:04:24 PM AEST
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WELL DONE! so touching i just love it. keep up this awsome work. peace out.


Re: Love's First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by mjiann on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 09:17:35 AM AEST
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beautiful. definately keep up the good work


Re: Love's First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by VampryssCherry on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:14:40 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. I wish I read more poems that were written this well, with so much emotion in it.




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