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Array ( [sid] => 105146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can We? [time] => 2005-09-06 05:30:45 [hometext] => I cannot really say much about this, except its just how i felt at that moment....and still feel this way [bodytext] => Come on sweet love
can we write?
the end to our story
can we prove i was right?
can we expose?
the love we shared
can we show?
the fact...that you never cared
can we remember?
all that was good
and forget to remember?
the love that should...

that should of been stronger
that shouldn't of came to an end
that should never be forgotten
that shouldn't show the pain you send

can we say goodbye?
can we say so long?
can we say goodnight?
can we say who was wrong?

You,
only you
im sorry
but it wasnt me
this pain
that i feel
isn't what i've done
the facts are real
you know what you've done
and you will never forget
you will never remember
this as a love you regret

Goodbye.....
for the last time
I will foget you
eventually
maybe tonight
maybe tomorrow
but goodbye
I dont love you anymore...... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 390 [topic] => 22 [informant] => cooley1818 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Can We?

Contributed by cooley1818 on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 05:30:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Come on sweet love
can we write?
the end to our story
can we prove i was right?
can we expose?
the love we shared
can we show?
the fact...that you never cared
can we remember?
all that was good
and forget to remember?
the love that should...

that should of been stronger
that shouldn't of came to an end
that should never be forgotten
that shouldn't show the pain you send

can we say goodbye?
can we say so long?
can we say goodnight?
can we say who was wrong?

You,
only you
im sorry
but it wasnt me
this pain
that i feel
isn't what i've done
the facts are real
you know what you've done
and you will never forget
you will never remember
this as a love you regret

Goodbye.....
for the last time
I will foget you
eventually
maybe tonight
maybe tomorrow
but goodbye
I dont love you anymore......

Copyright © cooley1818 ... [ 2005-09-06 05:30:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Can We? (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobManning on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 03:51:40 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very well written. I'm going through some tough times right now, and this poem helps me to forget about the past and move on, Thank You

Re: Can We? (User Rating: 1 )
by Naughtygurl on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:01:40 PM AEST
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Well heres a quick little story " I went to my highschool homecoming last night. Seriously I have become close friends with one of the hottest guys ever. It just so happens he likes someone who I dont very well get along with.. For some reason it hurt me but hes happy so , so am i. " this story probably was really gay to you but ya .. your poem is awesome it just made me think of last night , and it sounds like your getting over something that hurt you.. so keep on writing

Re: Can We? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 02:19:34 AM AEST
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This one bites but know the feeling.
Some times it's a good thang.

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