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Array ( [sid] => 105124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => About Angels [time] => 2005-09-05 20:55:53 [hometext] => so confused [bodytext] => She sits listening to the angels wings
The soft whisper of their song
Yet here she'll wait alone
Searching for the one

Heavy and staggered breathes follow
It's the question all have dread
Will He accept her
Or will she stay on the ground

Small clasped hands rest on her knee
She can't decide what's right and wrong
She begs for the answer
Though the conclusion never comes

She feels the angels touch
and smells the triumphant scent
Her thoughts race to the finish
And there she finds the solution

No one is there waiting
and that is how she knows
that He will except her
When it's her time to go! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 43 [informant] => FlirtQueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

About Angels

Contributed by FlirtQueen on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:55:53 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

She sits listening to the angels wings
The soft whisper of their song
Yet here she'll wait alone
Searching for the one

Heavy and staggered breathes follow
It's the question all have dread
Will He accept her
Or will she stay on the ground

Small clasped hands rest on her knee
She can't decide what's right and wrong
She begs for the answer
Though the conclusion never comes

She feels the angels touch
and smells the triumphant scent
Her thoughts race to the finish
And there she finds the solution

No one is there waiting
and that is how she knows
that He will except her
When it's her time to go!

Copyright © FlirtQueen ... [ 2005-09-05 20:55:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: About Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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A very beautiful poem, I liked the ending it topped it off. SLipSiX.

Re: About Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by MadCackle on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:14:39 PM AEST
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I am not usually intrigued by angle/religion type poetry however nice writ the last verse concludes it nicely

Re: About Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 03:36:16 AM AEST
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Beautifully brought to a close. A few spelling issues, but all in all, a nice piece.

Loende

Re: About Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 05:19:30 AM AEST
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This was such a beautiful poem. I love the vivd images that spring my minds eye.

I also love the way you used detils for this. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem.

Jane~

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