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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The Song
[time] => 2005-09-05 02:00:00
[hometext] => its been a while since i have written any thing dark or sad but i got insipred today and got an idea and it turned in to The Song. It is a work of fiction that i wrote today i hope you all read and tell me what you think thank you for takin the time to
[bodytext] => Part one He stands in front of a crowd Playing his heart out on his guitar Playing the song he wrote for her His fingers start to bleed Down the strings and to the ground But no one notices no one stops to listen Or even turns a head but he doesn’t care He is playing just for her Even if she can’t hear him he won’t stop Part Two She had spent all day crying again No one noticed her or so she thought No one went to give her a kind word She needed to be shown some one cares She went home and her family was fighting So she ran upstairs before they could Find out she was home to take it out on her Locked the door to her room And then the one in the bath room She got her razor out and started slashing away She cut too deep this time and Just rested her head on the toilet seat Closed her eyes and went to sleep Part three Hours went by The sun had disappeared into the clouds The moon was not in sight yet No one on the crowd had noticed him But others had come to play Others who accepted who they were And what he wanted to do So they played with him They played that song for her But no one noticed, no one cared Nothing could get them to stop Not until she heard the song And then he saw her Torn apart and broken down Her eyes tearing And knees on the ground Part Four The moon was out and the stars were kissing The snow had fallen and they were not even fazed Nothing could get them to stop playing They were playing the song so loud and hard But no one cared, no one noticed But they did not care she had to hear the song They would not stop playing until He gets down on his knees closes his eyes And keeps on playing the song Minutes pass he opens his eyes and sees her Broken down on her knees And so he puts his guitar down and goes to her But the rest of them keep playing Part five She opened her eyes And saw her wrist the bleeding had stopped She stood up and looked into the mirror She tried to wash the blood away But could not wash it off She put her hands in the water again And put them to her face She tried to wash the streams That the mascara left behind when she cried She always looked so beautiful when she cried But it would not wash off so she dried her self off On her way down she saw her father beating on her mom She tried to stop him but it was as if she was not even there So she went outside to find help Then the police lights were in sight She knew it was for her parents So she just went for a walk It was snowing but she did not feel cold She did not feel anything at all and wondered why But she just kept on walking She passed people on the street They did not even give her a dirty look She was used to them doing so and calling her names Slut, whore, tramp Some had even tried to buy a night with her But she never could be bought She walked for miles and did not feel tired She walked to the busiest street she could find There was a crowd of people but no one noticed her So she broke out in tears and fell to her knees It was such a sad sight but no one noticed, no one cared Or so she thought Part Six He went to her as the band played on When at her side he went to his knees She raised her eyes from the ground Looked at him and then she knew All the blood started to fade away The makeup cleared and she was more Beautiful than ever, so much like an Angel He took her hand and they floated away When they came back down he got his guitar And he played the song for her For the first time in her life she felt noticed For all the right reasons by the right one And she was happy He was happy to play that song for her Everything was covered by snow But they were as warm as could be The music filled the night time sky And everyone could now hear it They all looked up at them What an amazing sight Everyone saw how beautiful she was They band played on The song started to fade And with it them Until the song was over And there was nothing left But the tears in the people's eyes And the look of awe upon their faces For they did not know what they had seen But I know For I was the guy and you were the girl Two souls dead to their world Until the day we died The end [comments] => 5 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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