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Array ( [sid] => 105009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (Evil) Loco Motive [time] => 2005-09-04 01:52:18 [hometext] => Crazy Runaway train going straight to Hell real fast! [bodytext] =>
Evil locomotive’
Burnin’ down the train tracks.
Chaos and terror,
Churnin’ from the smoke stacks.

Rickity wracket,
Chiga chuga choo choo.
Clickity clackin’,
Slick black voodoo.

The screamin’ engineer,
You may hear his torchered wail.
As demon volunteers,
Are fumin’ fear on scorchin’ rails.

This crazy train,
Don’t lug a car for stokin’ coal.
This crazy train,
Has chugged this far on broken souls.

The lazy faith caboose, cant break loose,
Caught fishin’, in the wishin’ well.
Locked in, last on the line,
Of good intentions, that finish in hell.

EvilTrainMessage
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(Evil) Loco Motive

Contributed by earthman on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 01:52:18 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Evil locomotive’
Burnin’ down the train tracks.
Chaos and terror,
Churnin’ from the smoke stacks.

Rickity wracket,
Chiga chuga choo choo.
Clickity clackin’,
Slick black voodoo.

The screamin’ engineer,
You may hear his torchered wail.
As demon volunteers,
Are fumin’ fear on scorchin’ rails.

This crazy train,
Don’t lug a car for stokin’ coal.
This crazy train,
Has chugged this far on broken souls.

The lazy faith caboose, cant break loose,
Caught fishin’, in the wishin’ well.
Locked in, last on the line,
Of good intentions, that finish in hell.

EvilTrainMessage

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Re: (Evil) Loco Motive (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 11:38:08 AM AEST
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Well now~~! Welcome to YPDC, earthman! This is very seriously a fine first post! If this is any indication of what we're to find when heading to your page in the future, I'll be sure to stop back often!

Finding this creative, intriguing and very well presented,
~Snemmy

Re: (Evil) Loco Motive (User Rating: 1 )
by DemonProdigy on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 05:52:46 PM AEST
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Damn, that would make a kick ass song! Great job.

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