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Array ( [sid] => 104996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''It's already cold. Let's make it burn'' [time] => 2005-09-03 21:10:02 [hometext] => .Buddy. So many times, we've tried. -i just winged this one from someting that just happened. [bodytext] => My body's tensing up know, i can feel it.
I can feel my heart about to break already.
It hurts like as if it has already happened,
and it hasn't.
The pain across my wrists is from the gashes.
I tried to bring you back to life..
recreate you from the ashes.
I can already sense that cold chill making my stomache ache.
I can already see that razor blade making my body shake.
It's like nothings real.
But nothings happened.
I know that we've been shattered all to pieces
and i've always tried to put them back together.
Everything has worked up till now
But can we feel the same about eachother?
You've made me cry out all my feelings.
You made me hurt like love was never worth it
You made me see reality at it's finest
But with that comes pain and ***** torment.
So let me try this one last resolution
and i promise you, that if it fails,
I will leave the pieces burning..
I let our everlasting love just burn in hell. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 381 [topic] => 72 [informant] => Lollypopxcore [notes] => |||||||Partially edited out, due the use of letters to indicate a banned word. Please ensure that, in future, all banned words are completely edited out prior to submission. Thank you. ---Moderator_14||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
''It's already cold. Let's make it burn''

Contributed by Lollypopxcore on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 09:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



My body's tensing up know, i can feel it.
I can feel my heart about to break already.
It hurts like as if it has already happened,
and it hasn't.
The pain across my wrists is from the gashes.
I tried to bring you back to life..
recreate you from the ashes.
I can already sense that cold chill making my stomache ache.
I can already see that razor blade making my body shake.
It's like nothings real.
But nothings happened.
I know that we've been shattered all to pieces
and i've always tried to put them back together.
Everything has worked up till now
But can we feel the same about eachother?
You've made me cry out all my feelings.
You made me hurt like love was never worth it
You made me see reality at it's finest
But with that comes pain and ***** torment.
So let me try this one last resolution
and i promise you, that if it fails,
I will leave the pieces burning..
I let our everlasting love just burn in hell.




Copyright © Lollypopxcore ... [ 2005-09-03 21:10:02]
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Re: ''It's already cold. Let's make it burn'' (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 09:50:05 PM AEST
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wow. thats all really that i can say. i really loved this. so well written, from just winging it you did pretty damn good. off too see mroe of your work. keep up the good writing!
-trini


Re: ''It's already cold. Let's make it burn'' (User Rating: 1 )
by starry_eyed_soul on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST
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amazing... ur a great writer.. keep it up.. i really enjoyed this poem.... i could feel it...
TiffanyShay
xoxo


Re: ''It's already cold. Let's make it burn'' (User Rating: 1 )
by LilyFire on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:06:50 PM AEST
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I've felt those kinds of pain before...I use to think that physical pain would help me overcome my emotional pain. These words are along the lines of past thoughts, and they touch me. Great poem.


Re: ''It's already cold. Let's make it burn'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 03:55:19 AM AEST
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You express your pain very well. The reader can feel your pain.
Take care.
David


Re: ''It's already cold. Let's make it burn'' (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:47:26 PM AEST
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such a powerful poem. great write, well done




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