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we'll end like this

I shall not listen again.

Multi-coloured lights of plastic and
red and green and blue
(((pulse))) and BOOM…

Girls and women
of hearts and breasts
spinning on arms
of passion like skin,
veins and muscles and sweat –

Girls and boys and men
Ineffectual alcohol and tears
gotee despedida con demasiada frecuencia…

Tongues and chocolate
skin and all will murmur
eloquent soliloquies.

My mind is on you all too often.
Lips like caramel but teeth like salsa

You will swing and flow
Dip down like humble
heart or corazón…

Corn and chips are cast and bet.
Are unredeemable in the sense of all

But us and we are palm to palm.
Will meet on hips and thighs and lips –
will hunger cielo in our eyes.
Will cast them upwards like dice –

Like ivory out of season and whiteness of angels
fawn loving eyes without cerveza…

And above all on wings,
no cream cheese and toasted
coffee beans but fingertips
feather skin.

Take my body with your tongue.
Take my heart with yours inside.

Take my naivety and fright;
we’ll end like this.

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we'll end like this

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:37:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

we'll end like this

I shall not listen again.

Multi-coloured lights of plastic and
red and green and blue
(((pulse))) and BOOM…

Girls and women
of hearts and breasts
spinning on arms
of passion like skin,
veins and muscles and sweat –

Girls and boys and men
Ineffectual alcohol and tears
gotee despedida con demasiada frecuencia…

Tongues and chocolate
skin and all will murmur
eloquent soliloquies.

My mind is on you all too often.
Lips like caramel but teeth like salsa

You will swing and flow
Dip down like humble
heart or corazón…

Corn and chips are cast and bet.
Are unredeemable in the sense of all

But us and we are palm to palm.
Will meet on hips and thighs and lips –
will hunger cielo in our eyes.
Will cast them upwards like dice –

Like ivory out of season and whiteness of angels
fawn loving eyes without cerveza…

And above all on wings,
no cream cheese and toasted
coffee beans but fingertips
feather skin.

Take my body with your tongue.
Take my heart with yours inside.

Take my naivety and fright;
we’ll end like this.

Copyright Â© SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2005-09-03 18:37:46]
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Re: we'll end like this (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:59:22 PM AEST
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beautiful with great images..

hugs n' love nessa

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