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Array ( [sid] => 104950 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Simple Question [time] => 2005-09-03 01:41:04 [hometext] => Sometimes the simplest feeling are the hardest to express [bodytext] =>
You call me a friend,
but could it ever be more?
You act so sweet,
and talk to adore.

I think about how life could be,
with you in my arms.
I wonder if you see me as
your precious little charm.

But do you see the love I have,
or are your eyes turned away?
Do you like me more than a friend,
or are my dreams far from today?

How do I reveal
the feelings I have for you?
Do I act the same,
or do I make a move?

I don't want to lose,
the friendship we both enjoy.
But I want to love you more than
just as a friendly little boy.

You make me feel special,
in your own unique way.
you send a smile across my face,
and brighten every day.

Your simple words,
and little acts of being kind,
pull me to your heart,
and make me feel divine.

I'm so confused
and I can't decide what to do...
Should I keep my feelings inside
or should I share them with you?

I wish there was just a way,
I could ask this simple thought,
then for sure I would know
if your heart has already been bought.

I guess I just wrote this poem
to show you how I feel
and how much I want to ask this question
without making a big deal.....
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 16 [informant] => jacobmanning [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

A Simple Question

Contributed by jacobmanning on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 01:41:04 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

You call me a friend,
but could it ever be more?
You act so sweet,
and talk to adore.

I think about how life could be,
with you in my arms.
I wonder if you see me as
your precious little charm.

But do you see the love I have,
or are your eyes turned away?
Do you like me more than a friend,
or are my dreams far from today?

How do I reveal
the feelings I have for you?
Do I act the same,
or do I make a move?

I don't want to lose,
the friendship we both enjoy.
But I want to love you more than
just as a friendly little boy.

You make me feel special,
in your own unique way.
you send a smile across my face,
and brighten every day.

Your simple words,
and little acts of being kind,
pull me to your heart,
and make me feel divine.

I'm so confused
and I can't decide what to do...
Should I keep my feelings inside
or should I share them with you?

I wish there was just a way,
I could ask this simple thought,
then for sure I would know
if your heart has already been bought.

I guess I just wrote this poem
to show you how I feel
and how much I want to ask this question
without making a big deal.....

Copyright © jacobmanning ... [ 2005-09-03 01:41:04]
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Re: A Simple Question (User Rating: 1 )
by LostAmbition on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 02:28:31 AM AEST
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Awsum discovery!!!
I say go for it!
Maybe she feels the same?
Only one way to find out.
Best of luck, and great poem!

Re: A Simple Question (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 03:25:55 AM AEST
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OMG this is a great poem i know exactly how you feal i like a guy and we are friends but im not sure if he likes me like that and im too shy to ask good luck with the girl!

Re: A Simple Question (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:20:46 PM AEST
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Well seems you just told her...........now have her read it, and wait for the out come?! Sometimes the eyes, can see, they just need a lil push.! Very lovly write.

Brew~

Re: A Simple Question (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 11:18:40 PM AEST
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Oh how i know exactly how you feel. I think you said it just here everything that needs to be said. Hope everything works out good for you. Good luck. Good write and thanks for sharing

Re: A Simple Question (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 12:13:21 AM AEST
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Nice-
Your own comments to this poem say it all
Joe

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