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Array ( [sid] => 104926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unreturned [time] => 2005-09-02 18:20:06 [hometext] => A heart is as fragile as the person it rests in. One's heart can be broken, and only love can fix it. But when there is no love to fix a broken heart, it tends to stay broken. All I can say, Curtis, I still love you [bodytext] => Falling into night's embrace
Cloacking me in a shroud of sorrow
Mournful winds sing a sad tune
Of unreturned love
A mirror myself
A life of sadness
Of wanting the one thing I cannot have
Flashes before my woeful eyes
My life
Such love for him I feel
But love unreturned is all i'm given
Dreams full of him fill my hopeful mind
Alas that is all that they are
For when I handed you my heart on a silver platter,
It was thrown back in my face
Broken into pieces
Never to be fixed by your love
A sad thing it is
A love unreturned [comments] => 6 [counter] => 305 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Unreturned

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 06:20:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Falling into night's embrace
Cloacking me in a shroud of sorrow
Mournful winds sing a sad tune
Of unreturned love
A mirror myself
A life of sadness
Of wanting the one thing I cannot have
Flashes before my woeful eyes
My life
Such love for him I feel
But love unreturned is all i'm given
Dreams full of him fill my hopeful mind
Alas that is all that they are
For when I handed you my heart on a silver platter,
It was thrown back in my face
Broken into pieces
Never to be fixed by your love
A sad thing it is
A love unreturned

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2005-09-02 18:20:06]
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Re: Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 06:36:58 PM AEST
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no matter how broken a heart may be love is always the cure even if it might not be with the person you wish, there is love for everyone....good poem keep it up

Re: Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:08:54 PM AEST
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Beautiful, extremely relatable aswell, very truthful, and heartfelt I liked it alot, Great job, can't wait to see more.

Re: Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:22:04 PM AEST
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"Unreturned" -is an intricate collection of meaningful personifications, vivid-figurative language and reflective metaphors.

An account of life, love-tragedy, one could very much so emote and relate with.

Well done.

Re: Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by Alibi on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:52:12 AM AEST
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All you wonderful poets on here make me want to start writing! Bless you and your heart. May it heal soon. Lovely poem!

Re: Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:03:18 PM AEST
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as long as you love your self first no one else really matters coz if you dont love your self no one else really will

and if they do they wont ever make you happy

Re: Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:08:48 PM AEST
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beautiful and moving...
hugs n' love nessa

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